Final remarks

Finished! Finished!

This book took me quite a long time to write, with over four million words. It was the first time I wrote such a long novel, and when I looked back at it, I felt quite a sense of accomplishment!

It’s just a pity that I didn’t get a top-quality product - the results were actually very close in the middle period, but the stamina was a little lacking.

Maybe if I update more, I can get it up, but the battle descriptions in this book are really too brain-consuming. When there are many battles in the middle stage, I can't speed up even if I want to. It drags on until the end and the results are cut in half. There is no other way, so I just give up ()

I will never write such a complicated system again! (I’m kidding, I’ll do it again next time)

Well~it’s okay.

Anyway, this is a complete story. Yu Cang completed his mission, and all the holes that needed to be filled were filled. The battle at the end was quite exciting and not a bad ending. It should satisfy all the readers, right?

How would you rate this book out of 10?

It's not like I won't even get a passing grade, right? (annoying)

This book has received a lot of criticism, and I am aware that there are some problems.

The performance of the previous book was almost zero, but I forced myself to write nearly 800,000 words to complete it. As a result, there were problems with the contract for the second book.

Plus some other things at that time... In short, my mentality exploded. The editor rejected my manuscripts more than ten times in a row. I really couldn't hold it anymore, so I had to use some ancient tricks.

Then the editor gave me the manuscript...

Sure enough, in online articles, routines are very important ()

So some readers said that the plot seemed a bit old-fashioned in the early stages, and I accepted it.

Originally, it was like this. It should get better in the middle and late stages, right?

There should be some scenes that will leave a deep impression on you, right? (Looking forward to it)

Alas, those who criticized me for my poor performance in the early stages probably couldn’t see the middle and late stages either.

I wish them a happy life~

What makes me quite sad is that a reader who followed the old book was very disappointed after reading the early part. It has completely lost the creativity and spirit of the old book (woohoo, I am here to eat, please don't leave, swallow, I will definitely change it later)

Then, there is the issue of the female lead that many people will talk about.

Well, actually, I feel very sad when I see others scolding this.

Because the interaction between the male and female protagonists at the beginning was my personal experience.

Some people say that the heroine's plot has no foreshadowing at all, some say that the heroine is too love-brained, and some people say even harsher things.

but……

Back then, she inexplicably fell in love with me, inexplicably pursued me, inexplicably, her eyes were full of me...

Love in real life does not require layers of foreshadowing or foreshadowing. The throbbing sensation of looking at each other at a certain moment is enough to create a story.

Well, you don't have to be envious. Feelings that come easily can also be lost easily.

I thought I managed this relationship very well. Those two and a half years of campus romance were the happiest time of my life. Unfortunately, due to various reasons, and the subsequent epidemic, we had to live apart, and eventually we broke up.

That’s why I was sad—when I opened this book, I had just broken up.

I naturally think that is my most outstanding romance, so I share it with everyone.

After all, I have limited love experience. She was my first love and the only love experience I could refer to at that time. When I wrote about the heroine, I could only write it this way.

Too bad, no one likes it.

It’s a pity to think about it. She once looked at me and said firmly and gently that the relationship between us was so romantic that even novels could not describe or compare to it... It’s a pity that now it seems like just a disgusting third-rate plot.

So, I was emo for a long time during that period, and coupled with the blow of a broken heart, I was almost ruined.

But fortunately, it's all over.

Maybe I can’t blame others, it’s just that my writing skills are not good enough.

There are still people criticizing my love line. It’s really... It gives me a headache every time I see it.

Besides, it would be fine if they just cursed at me for other things, but why would someone curse me for writing nonsense without ever having been in love... Oh, it makes me even sadder just thinking about it.

Okay, let’s not talk about this.

Anyway, the thing I got the most criticism for was that the early plot was too clichéd and the relationship line was not good. Otherwise, there shouldn't be any major problems.

The next book will definitely not have such problems! (I think)

So stop saying things like “don’t write a female lead in the next book”, “don’t write this and this”, “don’t write blah blah”, I also want to improve.

There are some things that I will never write if I don’t do it - don’t worry, no matter what, it will definitely be better than this book. After all, this book is also a summary and learning.

I must write a hexagonal online novel!

This has been Ben Pang's dream since childhood.

This book helped me enter the industry and identify some problems.

As for the next book, well... I can't say for sure, but I wish it success.

The book is expected to be published in late August, which won’t be too long. Be sure to come and support it then!

As for the content of the next book...it is quite different from this one.

In terms of worldview, it draws reference from esoteric Buddhism and some miscellaneous things, and is a little (just a little) dark, to the extent of just exploring it superficially.

This kind of world view may be a bit difficult to get into, but I will try my best to control the information density and narrative rhythm.

The specific settings and ability system are 99% highly innovative!

The texture and fashion level of the setting are absolutely maxed out!

Old book friends can rest assured about the aesthetic setting of this book (ok, ok, right)

I have been thinking about the setting and story of the next book for a long time, but I am not satisfied with the beginning and the early outline after several versions. Otherwise, I would definitely start writing the book tomorrow (because I have no money).

In short, stay tuned!

We will definitely not let down your expectations and support~

Well, okay.

So--

See you in the next book.

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Must see!

(End of this chapter)