Hu Bugui's expression immediately showed a hint of surprise. He then took the script from Yun Xinyan's hand and began to read it carefully. He frowned slightly and said in a low voice, "The storyline is fine, and the original framework is also correct. It's just that adding some messy romantic scenes has disrupted the storyline."

Hu Bugui picked up the script and began making revisions. Yun Xinyan said coldly, "I had already revised the first version and given my suggestions, but I guess it was treated as a scrap. They didn't even look at it and just made random changes. The whole story is loose and full of boring parts."

Hu Bugui frowned even more as he made a few changes and cautiously asked, "Let me see your initial revisions."

Yun Xinyan raised an eyebrow slightly and said casually, "Ask them."

Someone had already found the revised draft and given it to Hu Bugui. He pushed up his glasses and began to read it seriously. His eyes gradually filled with surprise. All the problems were hit to the mark, and the plot arrangements were absolutely brilliant. If it was revised according to Yun Xinyan's suggestions, it could at least become a classic.

He looked up at Yun Xinyan and saw that she looked languid, with a cold and alluring intent in her beautiful peach blossom eyes.

He withdrew his gaze. Yun Xinyan's appearance was simply too stunning. Guan Zhizhou asked with some concern, "Teacher Hu, can this script be revised?"

Hu Bugui frowned slightly and said, "This script is difficult to revise. The plot is currently fragmented, and many parts have been cut and are incomplete. Even I can only be 40% confident."

Guan Zhizhou looked helpless, so worried that he almost knelt down and begged Yun Xinyan for help, saying, "Boss Yun, how confident are you?"

Looking at Guan Zhizhou's useless expression, Yun Xinyan sighed softly, "I'm only half as good as him."

Guan Zhizhou ordered his men to buy the finest food and drinks from a grand hotel and served them to them, while constantly apologizing, saying, "It's all because I entrusted this to the wrong person, Jun Zixi, that I have to trouble Teacher Hu so much."

A look of surprise appeared in Hu Bugui's eyes as he looked at Guan Zhizhou and asked, "Was this script revised like this by Jun Zixi?"

"yes."

Hu Bugui's expression was complicated.

Yun Xinyan raised an eyebrow slightly and calmly said, "Someone with this level of skill can make it into the national team?"

Hu Bugui's face showed a hint of embarrassment.

“I’ve read her scripts. She’s quite capable, and her previous works have sold well. She even came to see me a few times recently. I was thinking of giving her a chance, but I didn’t expect… she’s still young and too eager for quick success.”

"Xinyan, are you still planning to revise this script? It's all a mess, a complete mess right now. If you're willing, I can get you into the national team directly. With your skills and my recommendation, getting into the national team won't be a problem."

Yun Xinyan said calmly, "You revise all the storyboards and scripts, I'll take care of the rest."

Hu Bugui knew that Yun Xinyan didn't like being controlled, so he didn't force her. The two of them buried themselves in revising the script.

Guan Xingshi came over immediately after receiving Guan Zhizhou's call. Guan Zhizhou stood outside the conference room door, anxious as an ant on a hot pan.

"Second brother, can the script be revised this time?" Guan Xingshi's face was also very nervous.

"We specially invited Hu Bugui to help revise the script, and they are revising it in the conference room now."