Chapter 152

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Topic post: The epic fantasy masterpiece "Journey to Immortality" featuring a male protagonist has reached its final chapter. Click to see the protagonist Lu Beichen's journey to immortality, as he wakes up with a murderous sword in his hand and drunkenly sleeps on the lap of a beauty!

Comments:

1st floor

Xs, a badly finished article, but the management is still promoting it here.

2nd Floor

Great, support Feida! Looking forward to the new article!

3rd Floor

Reply to the first post: The haters run away faster than the fans, I’m convinced.

4th Floor

Reply to the third post: Telling the truth is a black mark? The author has banned us from speaking? It’s just a bad ending, a bad ending, a bad ending!

5th Floor

Ls's tone was a bit aggressive, but Fei Da said from the beginning that he would write about the male protagonist's ascension. I was waiting for Lu Beichen to go to the fairyland to meet more high-quality girls, but what happened? It ended just after the tribulation period.

6th Floor

Reply to F5: That’s not a bad ending, I think it’s good to end here, Brother Lu is a winner in life, he has both girls and power, the rest of the plot is up to the readers to imagine.

7th Floor

The subsequent plot is sure that the male protagonist will continue to become stronger and stronger and become the strongest person in the world. It will be the same if the story goes on.

8th Floor

Xsrl, someone is seriously analyzing this rubbish stud article.

9th Floor

Reply to 8th floor: Do you want to eat Ls oil cake? What discussion thread do you dislike reading?

10th Floor

Reply to 9th floor: Just come in, is the forum specially opened for your male-centered novels?

Li Fei is a man who wrote books by dreaming, and you guys are blowing it up.

11th Floor

I agree with the 1st and 4th floor. An unfinished story is an unfinished story. Only some people whose brains are filled with pornographic garbage would think that marrying a bunch of beautiful wives and concubines is a perfect ending.

12th Floor

Reply to #11: Isn't Fei Da's writing always in this style? There are a bunch of girls in every article. If you don't like to read about men marrying beautiful wives and concubines, then don't read it.

13th Floor

Reply to the 10th post: Just out of curiosity, what’s the meaning of writing by dreaming?

14th Floor

Ls, the dreaming thing, is that the author of this article, Li Fei, said at the beginning of the article that the inspiration for his article "The Path to Immortality" came from a dream.

It is said that the great man dreamed of some very vivid characters one day. When he woke up, he could not remember the general plot, but only some scattered details and settings. What he remembered most clearly was that in the world of immortal cultivation, there was a pair of engaged cultivators named Lu Beichen and Xu Shulou in Lingxiao Sect and Wuchen Island, and there was also a little junior sister named Bai Roushuang, who seemed to have some feelings for Lu. In addition, the settings of the mortal world, the cultivation world, and the demon world in the dream, so he used this as a blueprint and wrote a book.

15th Floor

Who would believe it? In this day and age, you have to make up a story to write a book. Are you dreaming? Why didn't you say that you traveled through time and saw it with your own eyes?

16th Floor

Reply to 15th floor: No matter how sour the haters are, they can’t outweigh the popularity of this book.

17th Floor

Reply to 16th floor: Not popular at all.

18th Floor

Yysy's "The Journey to Immortality" is very popular, the plot is exciting, the hero is the strongest all the way, and all kinds of opportunities, magic weapons, beauties and beautiful women throw themselves into his arms, and there are always many people following it. But later it ended at the wedding, and the author also postponed the promised extra chapter about the hero's ascension to immortality, which pissed me off.

19th Floor

Just a brainless and cool article.

20th Floor

Reply to the 14th post: To be honest, I do believe in dreams. The settings in some parts of this article are very clear and detailed, but I always feel that they don’t fit in with the plot of this kind of cool novel.

21st Floor

Reply to post 20: To put it in human terms, the world view is well constructed, but the character relationships are written like shit.

22nd Floor

Reply to 21st floor: ...

23rd Floor

Reply to the 17th floor: No matter how unconvinced you are, Fei Da is a hit. How can movies and TV shows be sold if he is not popular?

24th Floor

An outdated director and a low-budget web drama, is this something you can brag about? It's hilarious.

25th Floor

I say, can you please ignore those haters on LS who are jumping around so much, and let's discuss the plot seriously.

26th Floor

Yes, let’s discuss the plot. I saw people arguing as soon as I entered the thread. I was so scared that I didn’t dare to say anything.

27th Floor

Reply to the 23rd floor: Hey, I wonder who will play my favorite little white girl.

28th Floor

Reply to the 27th floor: I heard that they found a rising star, not sure if it’s true or not.

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29th Floor

Slurp, slurp, it's the pure style I like.

30th Floor

I hope a beautiful woman can be chosen for the role of Xu Shulou. I love watching beautiful women tear each other apart.

31st Floor

Reply to the 28th floor: A crappy stud drama that fantasizes about a rising young actress carrying the male lead’s sedan chair. Dream on.

32nd Floor Administrator

The 31st floor has been banned for 24 hours. Please speak in harmony.

33rd Floor

It's finally closed. It's so annoying after jumping through so many layers.

34th Floor

+1. I am so fed up with such people. There are always such people in the comment section during the serialization period. Fei Da is easily influenced by the comments, which makes some plots particularly twisted.

35th Floor

I also remember that at the beginning, wasn't Xu Shulou's character more talented than Brother Lu? Some readers were not happy with this and insisted that the male lead was the strongest. They argued so much that they simply arranged for her to be expelled from the family and a series of tragic plots followed.

As a result, another group of readers were unhappy, saying that Xu Shulou is beautiful and has an engagement, and we all regard her as the male protagonist's reserve concubine, just waiting for Brother Lu to knock her down, and now you give us this?

This caused the author to try hard to cover it up, and in the end had her marry Brother Lu as a concubine, which really offended both sets of readers.

36th Floor

Ah, I was wondering why Xu Shulou's line looked weird, so that's it.

37th Floor

I was also surprised when I saw it, because usually in this kind of stories, the beautiful and strong woman would become the hero's wife, but Fei Da took a different approach and had her be mopped up by the villain, and then be married to the hero after that. It was really hard to resist.

38th Floor

Xu Shulou's plot is indeed weird. He had a good hand of cards but played it badly, and in the end he forced his way into the male protagonist's harem.

39th Floor

It's a novel with a male protagonist, and there are a lot of girls anyway, so I don't care about the supporting female role.

But I remember that Fei Da promised to fix this part after the completion? But I don't know if he had another messed up dream, and he insisted that the current development is the best and would not be revised.

40th Floor

Why else? I've finished the book, I've got the money, and I'm too lazy to coax the readers.

41st Floor

Reply to 40F: It hurts...

42nd Floor

But I really hate the character of Xu Shulou. I just want to see her suffer. I don’t want to see her enter the male lead’s harem!

43rd Floor

Stop crying here. Fei Da is pretending to be dead and refuses to change the text. If you have the guts, just give money to the production company and ask the director to change the ending for you.

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150th Floor

Md, the quarrel is finally over. Xu Shulou is a female supporting role with few scenes, but I don’t know why she becomes a bloody storm whenever she is mentioned…

151st Floor

Haha, what's wrong with me hating Xu Shulou? Can't I say that she's a scheming bitch? If I were to go through that time, I would kill Xu Shulou first, then snatch Lu Beichen's opportunity, and finally marry Xiaobai and Afu home.

152nd Floor

Reply to 150F: It’s too early for you to be happy, the quarrel is not over yet…

153F

Reply to 151F: Only marry Xiaobai and Afu? What about Xiaoya?

154th Floor

Reply to 153F: Xiao Ya is too arrogant, I don’t like her.

155th Floor

Reply to Floor 151: You have dreams and dare to snatch girls. Xianxia is a high-risk world. I guess you can only cling to Brother Lu’s thigh.

156th Floor

Well, I started fantasizing about traveling through a book again. When it comes to daydreaming, I have to admit that you, the netizen, are the best.

157th Floor

Reply to 151F: Kill Xu Shulou and take me with you. I just can't stand people whitewashing her by saying that she is also pitiful, a princess of a fallen country whose family was destroyed and her loved ones were killed... Can't she just cry in a corner? Don't come and harm Brother Lu and Xiaobai. By the way, authors these days don't write the ending of vicious female supporting characters too tragically, right?

158th Floor

+1, how come she can finally enter Brother Lu’s harem even though she repeatedly cheats on Xiao Bai? Isn’t it too easy for her?

159th Floor

If you don't like people liking you, stop pretending to be a parrot here.

160th Floor

If you like someone and someone doesn’t like you, I will scold you. If you have the ability, don’t read the post.

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1001st floor

Quote 157th floor

"Kill Xu Shulou and take me with you. I just can't stand people whitewashing her by saying that she is also pitiful, a princess of a fallen country whose family was destroyed and everyone was dead... Can't she just cry in a corner? Don't come and cause trouble for Brother Lu and Xiaobai. By the way, authors these days don't write the ending of vicious female characters too tragically, right?"

@Admin: Sorry, please help me delete my previous message.

1002 Floor

Who is pushing old posts? Ls, what happened to you?

1003F

Reply to 1002F: I traveled through time.

1004th Floor

Neuropathy.

1005th Floor

I testify for the 1001st floor, and I also put it back on.

1006th Floor

Aren't you guys bored?

1007th Floor

While this post is floating around again, I'd like to say that I have inside information and I heard that this drama is going to be revamped.

1008th Floor

It’s better to change it.

1009th Floor

Reply to 1008F: Have you figured it out?

1010th Floor

I searched all the comments made by 1001 in this thread. At the beginning, you called him Brother Lu all the time, and when you mentioned Xu Shulou, you called her a scheming bitch and a vicious woman... What on earth happened to you in just a few months?

1011th Floor

He traveled through time.

1012th Floor

Reply to 1011F: Wow, you even brought a shill? I admire people who have two accounts.

1013th Floor

I'm not a spy. 1001 and I traveled through time together. We developed different strategies. He wants to snatch Lu Beichen's opportunity, and I want to cling to Lu Beichen.

1014th Floor

Go ahead and continue editing.

1015th Floor

Aren't these the two time travel strategies mentioned in the thread? Can you come up with something new? And then?

1016th Floor

Then we all knelt down before Xu Shulou.

On a physical level, kneel.

1017th Floor

Xs, make it more plausible. Aren't you going to hug Lu Beichen's thigh? What does it have to do with Xu Shulou?

1018th Floor

I met Xu Shulou, Bai Roushuang, Lu Beichen, and Luo Fusheng.

1019th Floor

Oh, that’s great. Wait for us to ask you how you feel?

1020th Floor

No.

I feel like it's not for me to judge them.

1021st Floor

baffling……

1022nd Floor

Reply to 1016F: I admire the few fans of Xu Shulou who are so shameless in hyping him up.

1023rd Floor

Boring... and traveling through time? Primary school students? Don't go back, let this building sink.