Chapter 83 Peeping at her computer

"How can this be classical Chinese? Ah? How can this be classical Chinese?" Qiu Wuji grabbed Chu Ge's collar in anger and grief: "This is clearly vernacular, it just uses some parallel prose to describe the scenery!"

Chu Ge also had a headache.

It is definitely wrong to say that it is classical Chinese. In fact, her writing style belongs to ancient vernacular Chinese, and the style of the Four Great Classics is also of this type. If you read Journey to the West, you will feel dizzy with the numerous poems and songs in the first chapter, but in fact, most of the narratives and dialogues are still in vernacular Chinese. For today, it can be called semi-vernacular at most, and it is still a little far from classical Chinese.

Chu Ge was definitely not optimistic about the results of this style, but since he had no expectations for the results anyway, he just let her publish it.

I didn't expect that it would be rejected and couldn't even be put into the warehouse.

After all, I am neither an editor nor a member of the review team, and everyone’s review standards are different.

"The bottom line is that the scenery in the opening paragraph is too exaggerated. There is no need to show off so fiercely. It would be enough to just write about the majestic green mountains. You put it here, 'I have a poem to describe this scene', and 'The river is far away, I don't know where the fishermen and woodcutters are; the clouds are deep, I can vaguely see the boy returning', and spend two or three hundred words talking about this. It's unnecessary, really unnecessary..."

Qiu Wuji bit his lower lip, his expression filled with grief and indignation: "I've been thinking about this for a long time! This is also a necessary scenery foil. I've read storybooks for thousands of years, and they're all written like this..."

"Emmmm, I've read for thousands of years..." Chu Ge scratched his head. It was really hard to say that. Qiu Wuji's reading memory and writing style, which he had developed over the years, were deeply rooted. He couldn't change them easily. He hadn't read many novels in this world, so it was definitely not enough to cover up his ten thousand year foundation.

"By the way, didn't you deliberately study my writing style at that time?"

"Ah? I went to read a story... The style of writing, isn't it just like that?" Qiu Wuji sat on the edge of the bed in a daze: "And I've read so many Taoist scriptures and ancient texts, and I went back to the same path..."

"You're very quick at speaking, so why can't you write?"

"The way you speak is different. It depends on the context. You can't write like that. You won't write about what you said in the group chat in your book. Lulu, tell me..."

Chu Ge: “…That’s true.”

Qiu Wuji felt wronged: "Should I read books like crazy to find the feeling of modern writing style?"

"Let me put it this way. If you don't use your own style and deliberately imitate other people's style, can you do it?"

"Can I try to imitate yours?"

"You should imitate the masters of female channels when you post. In fact, female channels also emphasize beautiful writing, but everyone's way of writing is different. You can study it." Chu Ge said, "If you want to imitate me, you have to post on the male channel."

"What are the main differences between male and female channels? Female protagonists and male protagonists?"

"This is a difference in perspective. There is also a difference in style orientation. Female channels focus more on relationships, while male channels focus more on careers. Of course, this is not a generalization. Female channels also have career-oriented female protagonists, while male channels also have love stories. However, the details are different, as are the perspectives and ways of thinking..."

Qiu Wuji was overwhelmed: "Stop, stop, stop..."

Chu Ge had no choice but to say, "Each profession may seem simple, but there are many tricks to study it. This is why it is said that every profession is like a mountain between two worlds. You can't even tell the difference between male and female channels. Are you sure you want to continue writing?"

Qiu Wuji thought for a moment and said, "You guys are really detailed here, with segmentations for different readers. As for us... Hey, if I don't publish it here, but publish it over there, will it count? With my influence, it will be easy for the whole world to know about it within ten days... I can also find someone who studies the way of books to discuss it..."

Chugo slowly opened his mouth.

If you write a book there and build a world in it, this doll set...

"Let me give it a try. If it doesn't work, I'll come back and think of a solution." Qiu Wuji said a little embarrassedly, "Well, I've stayed long enough this time. How many days should I go back first?"

Chu Ge felt a little satisfied when he heard the tone of seeking opinions.

The head of the household!

Chu Ge didn't force it, and patted her shoulder: "Go and take the test. Although I'm not optimistic about it, I'm quite interested. I hope you can succeed."

Qiu Wuji didn't say anything, but just stared at his hand.

Chugo took it back awkwardly.

Qiu Wuji pushed him out: "Get out, get out, I want to go back."

Chu Ge then remembered that she was hiding in bed and her clothes were falling off. The thought made her heart flutter, and she suddenly said, "Your name as the protagonist is really not very interesting in that world. How about I change a word?"

Qiu Wuji didn't quite catch up with his jumping thoughts, and asked curiously, "What to change?"

Chu Ge turned back and changed a word on the document: "Chu Muchu."

Then he turned around and smiled: "Okay?"

Qiu Wuji stared at his smile in a daze, with something strange stirring in his heart that he couldn't express in words.

Isn't this just another example of Chu Ge's desire for love, which has no end, and he keeps saying it in different ways.

snort.

She turned her head away: "Okay, okay, you can write a book. Get out, I'm leaving."

Chu Ge reached out and grasped her slender hand: "In our world, when you say goodbye, you at least need to shake hands."

Qiu Wuji let him hold his hands and rub them twice without saying anything.

…………

Qiu Wuji went back.

Chu Ge stood in her room, looking at the computer that she had forgotten to turn off. He felt that Qiu Wuji's return this time was a bit like fleeing, in a hurry.

As for that, I won’t lift your quilt.

Chu Ge smelled the fragrance in his hand, his eyes fell on the computer document, and he fell into deep thought.

In his own settings, the book-based approach of that world is definitely not up to the level of creation, it is far from it. It is already the limit for such cultivators to summon some book spirits or use the characteristics of words to achieve some kind of magical effects.

Even in the planned conception, the ascended heaven cannot create the world through the way of books. This kind of means of supreme creation is either possessed by the protagonist or the final boss level, and it does not exist in the setting of this book at all.

Qiu Wuji's plan to create the nesting doll of the universe when she returns is unlikely to succeed, as she cannot break through the limitations of the world.

So the nesting doll issue can be put aside. What Chu Ge is really thinking about is that his book did not mention Qiu Wuji writing a book, so what kind of nature does it mean for her to go back to write a book and spread it around the world?

This will definitely have a certain impact and change on the world... but it shouldn't affect the direction of the plot. Will there be a problem with this level of change?

This is also part of the test.

I don’t know if Qiu Wuji has thought of this... Judging from the way she ran away, she probably hasn’t.

Chugo felt like a worried parent.

Well... parents should do what parents do! Chu Ge looked around like a thief, sat in front of the computer, and opened Qiu Wuji's hard drive and browser.

Which car did you look at last time? What weird things are you searching for every day? Let daddy see!

Um... the car is here...

Chu Ge clicked it and took a look, and almost dropped the mouse.

This is actually a movie about a M man being whipped and trained!

No wonder her reaction that day was not as intense as expected. Instead, she looked him up and down, which was extremely strange... So that's it!

Although I didn't get beaten at first! But this is not a good thing!

I've never seen a car like this!

Chu Ge was so angry that he almost vomited blood. He opened the group chat on his phone and said, "Whoever sent the M car to Sect Master Qiu that day, come out and get killed!"

(End of this chapter)