Chapter 168 The First Reader
The two chatted about the children for a while, and then the second sister sighed and said, "Brother-in-law came once this morning."
"Huh?" Lin Yuzhu was surprised. "Only my eldest brother-in-law came? My eldest sister didn't come?"
"No, my eldest sister was busy, so he came over to give her something and left. I guess my eldest sister got into trouble again, and my eldest sister's husband looked unhappy."
Lin Yuzhu also sighed after hearing this, "Well, since the eldest brother-in-law didn't say anything, let's just pretend we don't know. We have helped her in every way we can, and the rest is up to her."
"Yes, my elder sister's personality... Well, I told my elder brother-in-law about the last time I took her to see a doctor. He was silent for a moment and said he would take her to see a doctor himself in the future. I told him about Director Meng, but I don't know if my elder sister can stick to it and change her mind."
"Since my brother-in-law is willing to take her to see it, it means he is giving her a chance. I think my brother-in-law still wants to live a good life with my sister."
The second sister sighed again, "It would be fine if the eldest sister can change, but if not, the two of them will definitely not live long. Even if it's for the sake of the children, the eldest brother-in-law won't let the eldest sister drag down her husband's family and then the children."
"Yes." So in the previous life, the two of them eventually divorced, and the eldest sister was deserted by everyone.
"Forget it. As sisters, we have done everything we can. We have done our best. It's up to her from now on."
"You're right. No one can live for anyone else. If she doesn't change, then we won't have to care about her."
The two talked for a while, and then someone called outside to eat.
Lin Yuzhu had dinner at her second sister's house, chatted with Niu Niu for a while, and then left.
After arriving home, she was a little worried when she saw her son who still couldn't speak. Before going to bed, she asked Zhao Yanshu worriedly, "Why can't our son speak yet? When Shuyao was his age, he could speak word by word."
Zhao Yanshu listened calmly and said: "It's okay, he's less than one year old, it's still early, it doesn't matter if he starts talking later, as long as he can speak."
Lin Yuzhu thought about it and realized that although her son started speaking a little late in his previous life, he was not completely unable to speak, so she felt relieved.
Thinking that he would be back to school next month, he asked, "How is your new novel going? Will you have time to write it after school starts?"
“Almost finished.”
"Almost finished? So fast? Didn't you say that the novel is almost 100,000 words?" Lin Yuzhu was surprised.
"Well, it's nearly 120,000 words. Mainly because I prepared for a long time. I had already thought of the outline and the specific plot, so I didn't have to think too much when writing. But this is the first draft. I have to reorganize it later and pick out some typos before I can submit it. This time I plan to submit it directly to a publishing house."
"ah?"
Lin Yuzhu was surprised when she heard this. It wasn't that she thought he was too ambitious, but she didn't expect that Zhao Yanshu, who had always been conservative, would be so optimistic about this novel.
After all, if you are not optimistic about it, you won’t have such high expectations for it.
I was immediately curious, "Can I see it when you finish writing?"
"Of course, I originally wanted you to help me take a look at it first. To be honest, although I feel very satisfied with what I wrote, I am still a little worried that readers may not like it..."
Lin Yuzhu immediately assured him, "Don't worry, as your first reader, I will definitely give you the most authentic feedback!"
"Okay, then I'll show it to you first once I'm done sorting it out."
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