It has been removed from the shelves and will not be changed.
Because this book, from the first chapter to the nearly 150 chapters now, probably has many problems, especially regarding the description of characters' emotions, language, and actions.
There are also questions about the first person and the title of the book.
Because there were so many problems, we decided to do a complete overhaul.
I'm not sure if there will be any problems after the revision, but it should be much better than before, and there won't be too many additional plots added to the story.
Most of it is just about language description and the emotional development of the characters.
For example, the descriptions of Kowloon and the protagonist's origins, as well as the process of destruction, are too simple, and the content of the previous few pictures is relatively superficial.
There is also too little description of the plots about Vera and the protagonist's friend Nice, which results in an extremely poor viewing experience.
Regarding the punctuation and language coordination of the entire article, the first part is very poor, and the latter part is only slightly better.
But only a little.
Therefore, this rectification is not meaningless. I am making this rectification in order to retain more new readers.
But the number of words in the revised content is extremely large. If I typed faster than those people on the Internet, I could produce 50 pages in an afternoon.
It’s a pity that I use voice input, and the speed is as slow as it can be.
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So I guess there won’t be any new plot for a long time. Just based on the time I spent on the first picture, it took me nearly half an hour to modify it, so I know that the next part will be very long.
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It will probably take at least one summer vacation. By the time the summer vacation is over, the flowers will probably have wilted. But there is really no other way, so I have to do this to retain new readers.
When I have made all the changes and copied and pasted them into the new book, I will cancel the registration of this book.
Avoid other unnecessary troubles.
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Also, if you are interested in the previous revisions, you can take a look at them, but there won’t be any changes. You will just see more about the psychological changes of the characters.
However, the revised plot will use a combination of first-person and third-person perspectives to improve the previous shortcomings of insufficient fighting scenes.
Moreover, only the protagonist will appear in the first and third person, so I hope they can be clearly distinguished.
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