When Xie Jinzhi woke up in the morning, before he dealt with the film and other matters related to the film's development, he found that all the investors he had agreed to invest had already allocated the funds.
After discussing with Qian Duo how to arrange the things needed by the crew, Xie Jinzhi saw the message sent by Wen Runruan.
"I didn't expect that you would actually show it to me." Xie Jinzhi smiled as he looked at the script. He felt very honored that he would always be thought of in this matter, and it even made him feel needed.
The two of them haven't seen each other for a day. He doesn't know whether he can see Wen Runruan today. He also knows that her current homework needs to be completed within three days. The task may be very difficult. In fact, he doesn't know whether to disturb her.
After looking at the framework of the script, Xie Jinzhi was shocked by Wen Runruan's sense of country and righteousness. Although he had studied Wen Runruan's acting skills very well before and even knew that she had good acting skills, he had never thought that her ability to write scripts was also good.
Although the character motivations and behaviors in some places are full of conflicts with the character settings, the overall summary is remarkable, and even the title conception and various reversals are very appropriate.
This made Xie Jinzhi look at Wen Runruan with new respect. From the beginning when he decided to cooperate with Wen Runruan to later, Wen Runruan completely became a very uncooperative actor, which also caused Xie Jinzhi headaches more than once.
But it was not until later that he found out that every time Wen Runruan went back, she was studying the script.
However, Wen Ruan rarely went back afterwards, and her understanding of the script even reached a higher level.
Later, when he saw Wen Runruan's performance on the set of "Sending the Moon", he even felt that Wen Runruan's acting skills seemed to have reached a higher level.
After reading the script, he circled a few obvious shortcomings that needed to be revised, and then sent it to Wen Runruan.
Regarding the character motivations, I think you could have added a bit more embellishment to the friendship between the two spies in the beginning, and played up the atmosphere of national justice, so that the subsequent actions of the two spies would become more reasonable and smooth.
[At the same time, I looked at the situation you mentioned about the two spies facing off. When they were friends, they wouldn't bring up matters of state because they both knew this meeting would be their last.]
[Some of the words don't quite fit my personality, so I hope you'll change them. I've circled the specific content for you, so you can refer to it. Of course, my opinions aren't authoritative.]
Wen Runruan had just finished putting on her makeup when she received the message from Xie Jinzhi. After reading it several times, Wen Runruan smiled.
"I'm done. How are you?" After Quan Ye finished washing up, he saw Wen Runruan staring at her phone for a long time. The makeup on her face looked well done. At this time, he patted her left shoulder, and Wen Runruan put the phone away.
"It looks like everything is ready, so should we go together now?" Quan Ye glanced at the things on Wen Runyuan's desk, and then looked at Wen Runruan.
She had already prepared it. She could look at Xie Jinzhi's suggestions later because the class didn't start until 10 o'clock. So Wen Runruan was not in a hurry now. It was still early. She could go out for breakfast after 8 o'clock and then come back to revise the script. She could discuss it with Xie Yi when she went to class after 10 o'clock.
After cleaning up the messy cosmetics on the table, Wen Ruan picked up a bag and stood up: "Let's go!"
When she walked to the cafeteria, she happened to meet Xie Yi. She saw her chatting face to face with a man, and her expression seemed a little unhappy. Wen Runruan went in and saw that it was the boy she had sent to the infirmary before.
Seeing her gaze, Quan Ye naturally followed Wen Ruanyuan's gaze and recognized him: "Isn't this the boy from before?"
After looking over there, Wen Ruan nodded, expressing her approval of Quan Ye's words: "Okay, forget about it for now, let's go have breakfast first."
Wen Ruanyuan didn't want to study the relationship between these two people.
She only knew to pull Quan Ye to buy breakfast, but Quan Ye, who was holding her left hand, turned his head and looked at her again.
Just last time, Quan Ye still thought she could compete with him fairly, but today she saw him with Xie Yi. She could never forget the look Xie Yi gave Wen Ruanruan that day.
After breakfast, Wen Runyuan originally planned to find a place that was farther away, at least farther away from Xie Yi, as she had not yet finished working on the script. However, Quan Ye reluctantly pulled her and sat next to Xie Yi and the boy.
"Oh, isn't this a coincidence?" Quan Ye felt a little angry when she sat down. Although she was glad that she had one less rival in love, she felt uncomfortable when she saw Wen Runruan being abandoned.
At this time, the man just looked up with a look of surprise, and then he immediately sat in front of that person and started talking to them.
"After that day, I was wondering why I hadn't seen you guys, but today I met you." He looked at the breakfast in the two people's hands, and then introduced himself again.
"I forgot to introduce myself to you two after that time. My name is Xie Baiyuan." Xie Baiyuan smiled and expressed his attitude to the two people.
But looking at him like this, Quan Ye looked dissatisfied. His expression was not as good as that night, and he didn't even have the slightest intention of helping him explain.
"Why do I see that you don't look like you like our Ruanruan? If you didn't like her, why did you pretend to be knocked down by Ruanruan that night?"
But that day, Wen Runruan didn't actually see any intention of Xie Baiyuan to scam her, so she interrupted him, pulled Quan Ye's clothes, and smoothed things over.
"Don't listen to her nonsense. She just likes to talk too much. Just forgive her a little." Wen Ruanruan explained to the two people with a little embarrassment, although she was also reluctant to leave any handle in front of Xie Yi.
Perhaps having sensed the surging tension between the three people, Xie Yi put down the cutlery in his hand and looked at them leisurely.
In fact, from the very beginning, Xie Yi already knew what Xie Baiyuan had done to Wen Runruan in private, and the encounter this time was arranged by Xie Baiyuan.
"Why do I think you two seem to be getting along very well?" Xie Yi said this intentionally to Xie Baiyuan, but when these words fell into Quan Ye's ears, they did not sound so pleasant.
She stared at Xie Yi with wide eyes for a long time, then sneered, "Why, I can hear a hint of jealousy in your voice."
"Ah—I think so. This person is still looking at the pot when he has his cake and eats it too. You are not very attractive, so it is natural that he feels unbalanced."
Even after hearing what she said, Xie Yi was very angry, but he still looked at Xie Baiyuan, hoping that he would stand up and say something.
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