I'm sorry to say goodbye to my family in this way.
Most readers should already know the reason.
I was ignorant before and didn't manage well, so I just admitted my mistakes.
Su Nian’s journey has not yet ended, and the future plot is still very exciting, but I can no longer continue writing.
Thank you for your support.
I am also grateful to the person or group of people who made me suffer this loss. At least I will not make the same mistake again in the future.
A tree that stands out in the forest will be destroyed by the wind.
I didn't think much of this sentence before, but now I deeply feel the power of this sentence.
But novels test the author's imagination, plot-laying ability, rhythm control, and love of life.
I wasn't knocked out, I just needed to shake off the dust.
Every time it goes through the refinement and purification, it will become more perfect.
Maybe, you will see a book later and know it is me just by looking at the content?
This day is not far away.
Thank you.
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Below is the setting and outline of the novel Ji Niang:
Introduction: Top racing driver Su Nian traveled to a world where racing technology was just starting, but the racing cars here were all transformed by mecha girls. After being expelled from the club, Su Nian went back to the furnace to contract his first mecha girl - Xingchen. He took Xingchen to the track, conquered one competition after another, met Di Lin and Zi Dian successively, created his own racing club, awakened as an intelligent mechanic, and gradually became world-class (winning world-class competitions). After becoming world-class, he discovered that this world was being spied on by the void (an alien creature), and the mecha girls were actually the core of the spiritual mecha. In the chaotic power struggle, the male protagonist drove a mecha with the mecha girls as the core and finally defeated the void forces. He escaped by chance after the explosion of the void's nest, and drifted in the universe accompanied by the mecha girls, and finally found his way home.
Worldview: Mecha girls are special life forms that descended into this world. Originally, there were no mecha girls in this world. Mecha girls brought a new resource called sodium fiber. Humans discovered that sodium fiber is a very precious new resource. Mecha girls discovered that humans were intelligent mechanics who helped them fight against the void race (the goal of the void race is to plunder any valuable resources), so they started to cooperate. Since the nest of the void race is behind the void channel (which is understood as a kind of cosmic race track or wormhole. If you want to completely solve the void, you must pass through the void channel, and the void invasion also comes through this channel), the driving skills of the drivers of mecha girls are very high. In order to train qualified fighters, the Intelligent Island (the mecha girl force) lets the mecha girls transform into racing cars and drivers to participate in the competition. Those who become drivers of intelligent mechanics and win world-class competitions are qualified fighters and will drive mechas to fight against the void (the mecha is driven by the mecha girl as the core, which is equivalent to a battery, and the driver is the operator, which is equivalent to an intelligent brain). The mecha must be driven by the mecha girl and the driver together.
1) The heroine Xingchen was originally an abandoned mecha girl. She had strong straight-line acceleration but poor turning ability, and was considered a "killer racer". Later, she was rescued from the recycling yard by the hero. The hero made up for Xingchen's advantage with the golden finger (attribute points), and the two supported each other and eventually became world-class
2) Di Lin: The second girl of the male protagonist Su Nian
3) Zidian: The third mobile phone of the male protagonist Su Nian
Di Lin recognized Su Nian as his godfather.
Zi Dian recognized Su Nian as his master and guide.
Di Lin, Zi Dian and Xingchen are good friends, and Xingchen is the group's favorite.
4) Pig Leopard: Emperor Lin's follower, obedient to Emperor Lin, enemy of Xingchen, good friend of Zidian, admires Su Nian, but acts indifferent due to his arrogant personality
Female Lead: Xingchen
Identity: An abandoned mecha girl, actually a top-level mecha girl with a special skill - Emperor Engine, known for her speed.
Personality characteristics: She felt humiliated and inferior because of being called a killer racer. After being redeemed by Su Nian, she regained her confidence and restored her original personality. She is talkative, eccentric, curious about human society, likes to eat heavy-tasting things such as durian, stinky tofu, and snail noodles. She calls herself the Durian King, likes to read novels, especially palace fighting novels, and often puts herself into the characters in the book. She is eager to help Su Nian build a huge harem, but Su Nian only likes her, and has no romantic relationship with other mecha girls. She would be a little proud of winning the early game, but later as her opponents became stronger and stronger and she experienced defeat, her personality became much calmer.
Character transformation: the first time she turned a corner, she believed that Su Nian was the driver who took her to the track. Faced with the only salvation, she signed the core contract without hesitation. She won the championship in the Knox Rally and completely established her confidence. At the same time, she had a secret affection for Su Nian.
Male lead: Su Nian
Identity: Earth's top racing driver
Personality traits: a racer who pursues perfection. He has never been in love in his previous life and has no experience in relationships. He is very passive, shy, and has a strong sense of responsibility. He is very confident on the track and is completely different from himself. He has the title of track emperor and is full of competitive spirit. He is tolerant of others and follows the principle of "I will not offend you if you do not offend me". He did not kill Yu-786, the robot girl who had betrayed him, and Zhang Kai, the boss of the club who kicked him out. He is kind and empathetic, and is willing to help Xingchen and Zidian, robot girls with sexual defects. He heard that the sponsor's racing suit was made for his seriously ill daughter, so even though the racing suit is not good-looking, he still wears it.
Character transformation: Su was framed and killed in his previous life. After traveling through time, he was betrayed by the robot girl and expelled from the club. He was sensitive. After making a contract with Xingchen, he was gradually driven by Xingchen's liveliness and regained the feeling of flying freely on the track. He hoped to take Xingchen to world class, the highest honor in world racing. The relationship between the two became closer and closer in each game, but because of Su Nian's shyness and dullness, there was no progress, so Xingchen chose to take the initiative.
Highlight moment: He brought Xingchen to the track to slap Zhang Kai (former club owner) and Yu-786 (the betrayed mecha girl), and won the Knox Rally Championship with an invincible attitude, breaking the track record and being called the King of Knox.
Character transformation, character relationship, and ending: During the Knox Rally, Xingchen almost confessed to Su Nian. In order to make their relationship warmer, Xingchen also fought for the opportunity to take a hot spring bath with Su Nian. The relationship between the two became more ambiguous but was not broken. After the Maratela training match, Xingchen took the initiative to kiss Su Nian on the cheek; on the holiday island, Xingchen took Su Nian to experience the horror house, and with the help of the horror atmosphere and Su Nian's fear of ghosts, she found an excuse to kiss Su Nian again. Although the relationship between the two has not been officially announced, the tone has been set.
Ending: Love line: Xingchen confesses to Su Nian with the blessings and encouragement of her friends, and Su Nian and Xingchen are finally together.
Main plot: In the decisive battle with the void, Su Nian was seriously injured and dying. Facing the final attack of the void race, Xingchen drove the mecha into the void tide and blew himself up. Later, the core returned under the mutual induction of the core contract between the two and reshaped the body.
Female Supporting Role 1: Emperor Lin
Identity: Top-level mecha girl, born from watching the video of the match between Su Nian and Xingchen, regards Su Nian as her godfather, has strong anti-collision and stability, special skill: Imperial Power
Personality traits: not good at speaking, cold on the outside but warm on the inside, extremely competitive, attaches great importance to winning or losing in games, sometimes gives the impression of being a calm and aloof queen, but actually likes her favorite furry things very much, her bedroom is filled with pig dolls, she has a cat named Sphinx, who is kind-hearted and very considerate to Su Nian, and only shows her vulnerability in front of Su Nian.
Character Transformation: For Su Nian - Ever since she entered the auction, she has been waiting for Su Nian to buy her away. She rejected many clubs and chaebols, counting the petals every day without a smile on her face, until the day when Su Nian bought her away. She paid the auction price in the form of an IOU, and then tore up the IOU. After being defeated by DL-02, she fell into self-doubt and thought she was not worthy of following Su Nian anymore, exposing her vulnerable side. After Su Nian took her to defeat DL-02, she signed a core contract with Su Nian. She always believed that Su Nian was a great existence like a father.
Ending: Died for Su Nian.
In the decisive battle with the void, Su Nian was on the verge of death. In order to let Su Nian and Xingchen leave, he chose to stay behind to stop the Queen of the Void. Then he self-destructed his mecha. With the help of Zi Dian's skills, the core escaped into the void, and then returned to Su Nian under the induction of the core contract to reshape his body.
Female supporting role 2: Zidian
Identity: A top-notch mecha girl, abandoned by her former pilot Qin Yuechu, who owed her a large amount of liquidated damages. In order to gain freedom and leave Qin Yuechu, she had to join the underground black-and-white tournaments and make money by fighting. Possessing a special skill---Fantasy at this moment, he has the strongest comeback power, but it also comes with the greatest danger, a dancer on the edge of a knife.
Personality: Sensitive and inferior. She has become very unconfident after being PUA-ed by Qin Yuechu for many years. She always doubts her own abilities. Even if others are wrong, she will find her own problems first. She habitually pleases everyone around her, pretends to be strong, and covers herself with a thick shell, but she is actually a crybaby.
Character transformation: When she saw Su Nian and Xingchen win the championship, she felt envy and yearning. In the underground cemetery competition, Su Nian saw Zi Dian's talent and invited her to be the second-in-command girl. Zi Dian refused because she was afraid of causing trouble for Su Nian due to debt. Zi Dian refused Su Nian twice because of her inferiority and sensitivity. Later, Su Nian cleverly brought her to the Xingchen Club and made her the second-in-command girl. In the subsequent competitions, she gradually walked out of the shadows and discovered her potential.
Su Nian once told her that if miracles had a color, it would definitely be purple.
Ending: When Void was dying, she took the dying Su Nian away, and after completely destroying Void, she burned herself to help Su Nian retrieve the core of Xingchen and Di Lin's intelligence machine, and finally turned into a dry core and shattered. She hoped that Su Nian would be happy, and couldn't bear to see Su Nian lose his loved one, so he chose to sacrifice himself.
Later, with the help of Xingchen and Di Lin, Su Nian found all the fragments of Zi Dian's intelligent core and reassembled it. In order to save Zi Dian, he entered the void again to kill the seriously injured Void Queen. The heart of the Void Queen resurrected Zi Dian.
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Plot Development
Long-term:
(1) Contract Star
Su Nian was dismissed by the Tengyue Club. The mecha girl Yu-786 who was originally assigned to him betrayed him. After meeting the club owner Zhang Kai to compete in the Knox Rally, he left the club. In the retraining field, he met Xingchen who was about to disintegrate. He found that Xingchen was very talented and a top mecha girl with special skills, so he took Xingchen for a run to build up his confidence, and the two signed a core contract. (Chapters 1-6)
(2) Triumph Club Training Match and Bana Valley Training Match:
In the training match of the Triumph Club, she used the ejection start and drifting techniques from her previous life to take the lead, and at the same time let Xingchen understand that she was not a defective product, nor a killer car, but she just had not released her sexuality.
In the Bana Valley training match, he encountered strong enemies, the intelligent mechanic Li Yang and the robot girl Comet, and won a narrow victory. Su Nian's strength was recognized by Li Yang. (Intelligent Mechanic - the extraordinary power of this world) The male protagonist initially came into contact with the intelligent mechanic, and developed a yearning and curiosity for him. Xingchen's engine exploded during the race and Su Nian was injured. Due to his excellent performance in the training match, he got the attention of the sponsor, Uncle Da, who supported Su Nian financially for the first time - paying for Su Nian's medical expenses and subsequent racing suit expenses. (Chapters 7-20)
(3) Primary-level competition - Knox Rally:
Knox Rally: Su Nian swapped starting positions with Huang Jun, whom he had met once in the previous training match, and moved to the side of Zhang Kai and Yu-786. In the race, he slapped Zhang Kai and Yu-786 in the face, resolved the targeting by the SSC Club, and finally won the championship. The heroine Xingchen secretly has feelings for the hero. (Chapters 24-33)
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