Chapter 209: Such talent, even the coffin lid can't hold it down
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"Lu Feng, it's time to eat."
Just when Lu Feng finished writing, no, copied the first chapter, Li Xiaoqin came up excitedly and called him downstairs to eat.
"I'll be right there."
Lu Feng went downstairs to eat. During the break, he quickly opened the system and glanced at the original novel.
Something is wrong.
He had not read the original novel before, but he had watched the TV series "Sito".
Compared to the TV series, the beginning of the novel is a bit dragged out.
I dragged my feet on writing the 6th chapter before the heroine Si Teng appeared.
The heroine in the early stage is a mistress named Anman, who used to be a concubine of Brother Zhao. It is because of this Anman that the hero Qin Fang dies.
The screenwriter of the TV series obviously realized that doing so would disrupt the rhythm, so he put this part of the plot at the end.
As a result, the plot is much more compact than the original.
Moreover, in the novel, Si Teng only has an arrogant attitude at the beginning, and is not as cute in contrast as in the TV series.
no.
My aesthetic taste does not allow the novel to be published in this way.
There is no other way, I have to start over again!
What a huge workload!
First, delete Chapter 1 and put it in the later memories. Let Qin Fang die at the beginning and let Si Teng be resurrected to stick to the theme.
The heroine only appears in Chapter 6. How can this be ridiculous?
Perhaps, novels written in 2008 are more suited to this slow pace.
But as Lu Feng who traveled from the future, he himself can't stand this slow pace, so how can he let his readers suffer like him?
change!
Thinking of this, Lu Feng hurriedly ate a few mouthfuls of rice, turned around and went upstairs.
"Xiao Qin, I may have to stay up all night tonight. This novel is really killing me! If you are sleepy, go to bed first."
"Should I prepare a midnight snack for you? What would you like to eat? How about wontons?"
Lu Feng made an OK gesture and went upstairs without looking back.
Li Xiaoqin was not angry at all, instead she smiled sweetly.
Because Lu Feng told her that this novel was written for her.
Now, Lu Feng is so concerned about this novel. Doesn’t that mean he is indirectly concerned about her?
What is she angry about?
Instead, I feel so happy and so blessed!
"There is no other way. You decide whether you want to accompany me..."
While cleaning in the kitchen, Li Xiaoqin was humming the song "Preference".
No need to ask, this song was definitely written for her, and it has become the theme song of "Qinqin Crab Roe Pastry".
In order to promote [Qinqin Crab Roe Crisps], Lu Feng really put a lot of thought into it.
Li Xiaoqin was very happy.
The only thing that made her unhappy was... the heroine in the MV, a woman named Yang Mi. She was so annoying, she looked too much like a vixen, her eyes could emit electric currents, and when she cried at Lu Feng, she looked a little unclean.
Without a doubt.
Another potential rival!
Kill, kill, kill!
"Lu Feng, I'm starving, is there anything delicious?"
Li Xiaoqin had just cleaned up the dishes when Reba rushed in from the door like a gust of wind.
When she saw Li Xiaoqin cleaning up in the kitchen like a good wife and mother, Reba was stunned and stood there.
Oops.
I almost forgot that Li Xiaoqin is the big boss of this area.
Thinking of this, Reba immediately put on a sweet smile and said flatteringly: "Sister Xiaoqin, where is my brother?"
"He is working on his work in the study upstairs. Don't disturb him."
Although Li Xiaoqin was a little unhappy when she saw Reba running in skillfully, this emotion only flashed by and was quickly hidden.
No matter what, Reba is Lu Feng's godsister.
At this stage, she is just Lu Feng’s girlfriend.
Before she married Lu Feng, Reba's relationship with Lu Feng must have been much closer than hers.
So, if she can live in this house, Reba can definitely live in it too.
It is absolutely impossible to drive Reba away.
The only solution for now was to gather Reba closely around her and let Reba help her drive away wild women like Liu Shishi.
"Reba, we just finished eating. Lu Feng is such a fool. He didn't even tell me that you were coming back for dinner..."
Li Xiaoqin deliberately complained to Lu Feng a few words.
The subtext is to hint to Reba that Lu Feng doesn't take you seriously.
If he took you seriously, how could he not ask you if you wanted to come back for dinner?
"Sister Xiaoqin, this is not my brother's fault. I didn't explain it to him clearly. He probably thought that I would treat my roommates to a meal on my first day."
Li Xiaoqin's little trick made Reba sneer in her heart just by hearing the beginning of her words. Your level is too low to try such clever tricks on me, right?
Reba cracked Li Xiaoqin's routine in no time.
"Then I'll go out and get you some dishes?"
Unable to get Reba's attention, Li Xiaoqin smiled awkwardly and decided to launch a gentle offensive, behaving like a qualified sister-in-law.
"No need, I'll make a phone call and ask Hot Wind Restaurant to deliver the food to me."
Reba knew long ago that she would have no food to eat if she lived under someone else's roof. Fortunately, she was smart and opened a restaurant early on, so she could have whatever she wanted to eat.
Li Xiaoqin, you big fool, still wants to fight with me?
Can you beat me?
If Lu Feng hadn't protected you, you would have died 800 times already!
"Then please do as you please. I'll go wash the clothes. Lu Feng bought me a lot of new clothes today, and they all need to be washed and dried in the sun."
Feeling like she couldn't handle Reba, Li Xiaoqin could only quietly withdraw from the battlefield.
If you continue to fight, you might end up getting hurt.
But before leaving, Li Xiaoqin couldn't help showing off.
"Sister Xiaoqin, let me help you wash."
Seeing that Li Xiaoqin had no other options and wanted to escape, Reba suddenly started laughing.
Since you backed down, I will let you go. After all, we all live under the same roof and there will be plenty of opportunities to fight in the future.
You can fight, but you can't lose face.
This is called fighting without breaking.
If they lose face, Lu Feng will be the one in trouble.
I am so smart and clever, how could I make things difficult for Lu Feng?
Lu Feng, this damn guy, once he feels irritated, he will go on a trip on a whim. Maybe he will go to some place and meet some girl.
What if you end up having affairs with six people at the same time, wouldn't you be the one who suffers?
"Reba, you are going to register at East China Normal University today. Do you know any particularly handsome male classmates?"
Li Xiaoqin took Reba upstairs, unpacked the new clothes, cut off the labels, and put them into the laundry basket one by one, preparing to wash them by hand later.
These clothes are quite expensive, and Li Xiaoqin is afraid that they will be damaged by washing in the washing machine.
"There are handsome guys, but they don't even have the courage to talk to me."
Reba helped Li Xiaoqin to take the unpacked new clothes to the laundry room downstairs. She accidentally glanced at one of the sets of Pikachu pajamas, which was exactly the same as the one she bought for Lu Feng.
She was immediately happy.
Lu Feng, this damn guy, is really smart. He can even crack this?
Reba looked around and found that among the people around her, only Lu Feng was worthy of being her rival.
The IQ of other people is far behind.
"Why don't handsome classmates dare to talk to you?"
Li Xiaoqin was a little puzzled.
If Reba finds a handsome classmate, she will have no time to look for Lu Feng, which is equivalent to directly eliminating a little love rival.
"My brother drove me to school in his Mercedes-Benz S400, put 5,000 yuan into my meal card, took me out to the streets, and made my bed."
"Now, the whole school is saying that a beautiful mixed-race girl has come to the business school. She has a super handsome boyfriend, who is super rich, super gentle and considerate... Under such circumstances, which boy would dare to talk to me?"
"Aren't you afraid of feeling inferior?"
Although the title of mixed-race beauty made Reba speechless.
She is pure, not mixed.
But she said she was very happy about the rumors spread by her classmates privately.
Yes, the truth is what you think it is.
"Why don't you clarify? Tell those male classmates that Lu Feng is your brother."
Li Xiaoqin asked with a smile, but her tone was a little harsh.
Reba, this damn girl, is actually pretending to be powerful like this outside? Lu Feng is your boyfriend, then who is my boyfriend?
"What is there to clarify? Those male classmates are young, but they don't think about studying hard. They are full of hormones and chasing beautiful girls. I have nothing to communicate with these people."
Reba snorted and said in a pretentious manner.
Compared with Lu Feng, those handsome guys are nothing but useless fools, and she totally despises them.
Li Xiaoqin felt a little overwhelmed because she couldn't argue with Reba and her relationship wasn't as close as Reba and Lu Feng.
Originally, she was planning to sleep with Lu Feng tonight.
However, based on her understanding of Reba, Reba would most likely say that she was scared to sleep alone at night and wanted to be with her. Could she refuse?
really.
In the next second, Reba hugged Li Xiaoqin's arm and said pitifully: "Sister Xiaoqin, I slept alone last night and kept hearing strange noises. I was a little scared."
"Got it. I'll sleep with you tonight."
Li Xiaoqin knew that Reba would have this trick.
Although she felt helpless, she had no choice but to agree.
Unexpectedly, Reba smiled slyly and whispered, "No. What I mean is that I want to sleep with my brother at night. Can you sleep alone?"
What?
It's simply the opposite of Tiangang!
If I could agree to this request, I would simply stop calling myself Li Xiaoqin and change my name to Lu Xiaoqin.
"Hey, just a joke."
Seeing Li Xiaoqin was so furious that his head was about to smoke.
Reba went forward and hugged Li Xiaoqin and coaxed her, "Sister Xiaoqin, I love you the most. I will sleep with you and we will watch TV shows together at night, leaving my brother alone to sleep."
That's about right.
Li Xiaoqin was slightly relieved and felt a little happy. Reba was quite sensible, knowing that she couldn't sleep alone at night, and was willing to watch TV series with her.
wrong.
What's there to be happy about?
Originally, I could sleep with Lu Feng and watch TV series in each other’s arms!
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The two little girls downstairs were fighting openly and secretly.
Although they seemed to be sisters on the surface, their secret life was filled with swordplay and bloodshed. Every word they said could kill people without shedding any blood.
And upstairs, after thinking it over, Lu Feng decided to delete the 6,000 words he wrote yesterday.
Of course, these texts can be used later, so save them in the draft box first.
After reading the entire novel and having a general idea of it in his mind, he decided to make some cuts and adapt it according to the TV series version.
In this way, the number of words can be reduced from 400,000 to about 200,000.
One chapter of 3,000 words per day, completed in two months.
Lu Feng just deleted the post he posted yesterday, and many posts appeared in the Li Yi forum asking the reason.
"What's going on? Boss [Yi Jian Zhong Qin], why did you delete the novel? Does anyone know the reason?"
"Yesterday I was discussing with someone how to write the second chapter, but Lu Feng deleted the novel today? Is it because he was too tired from filming?"
"I asked someone, and Lu Feng hasn't been on the set these past two days. A big shot has calculated that his crab roe crisp factory now makes several million a month, and tens of millions a year. He probably went back to being a rich second-generation!"
"A local from Kunshan came to testify that what the above person said is true. We have a relative who is a supermarket purchasing manager. Lu Feng's crab roe crisps are in short supply and demand is so high that you have to wait in line for at least a week to get them."
Just as netizens were discussing it.
Lu Feng released the remastered version of "Half-demon Si Teng".
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In late December, on the 23rd day of the 11th lunar month, it is the waning half moon, and the moon rises at midnight.
Qin Fang remembered it very clearly. When the half moon hung high in the sky, his heart suddenly started beating again.
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"In which year did the Japanese cause riots at Marco Polo Bridge?"
In the night, the vines were swaying and the woman just looked at him. It was a very strange scene.
Qin Fang looked at her tattered cheongsam and suddenly realized something. He asked hesitantly, "Did you die in 1937? My name is Qin Fang, and I died two days ago."
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"Ms. Si Teng, please be careful with your steps."
Si Teng ignored her and turned around proudly, but soon found that her feet were on the mountain covered with sharp rocks, which was very painful and cold.
Si Teng stopped and turned back to hum softly: "What did you just say?"
"Ms. Si Teng, you are not wearing shoes and your clothes are very thin. Do you need..."
Qin Fang didn't finish his words.
Si Teng raised her chin, opened her red lips slightly, and said lightly: "Beg me."
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Chapter 1 was revised and edited.
Lu Feng suddenly felt that the plot became much more smooth and Si Teng’s entire character became much more lovely.
This is a brand new version he created by combining the original novel and the TV series.
Another second creation.
Revising his manuscripts every day like this, Lu Feng suspected that he might really become a great talent.
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After revising the first chapter, Lu Feng immediately grasped the style of the entire work and spent the entire night typing away on the keyboard.
Until the next morning.
He directly revised 20 chapters.
The main plot basically follows the plot of the TV series, and the text is copied from the original novel, but he has made some modifications and added some of his own writing style.
The pace of the novel is faster than the original work.
At the same time, Lu Feng deleted a lot of descriptive parts and used more dialogues, so that when it was adapted into a script later, it could greatly reduce his own workload.
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It was pretty much the same as Lu Feng had imagined.
After the second version was released, the comments suddenly became much more cheerful.
In the first version, those netizens just came to check in and watch the fun, and considering the success of Lu Feng’s first two novels, they didn’t dare to say anything.
After all, Lu Feng is considered a big name in Tieba, and both of his novels have achieved unprecedented success.
A lot of iron powder has gathered.
Below, if anyone dares to say something sour, he will probably be scolded by a bunch of people.
Therefore, netizens dare not make random comments, maybe there will be a super reversal later?
After the second version came out, more and more people started speaking without restraint.
"My name is Qin Fang, and I just died two days ago... What kind of self-introduction is this? It's hilarious. I'm really afraid that he will say, 'Add me your contact information, and come to my grave to dance when you have time?'"
"I have no clothes or shoes, and I'm freezing now, but you have to beg me... beg me, and I'll wear them. This heroine is so tsundere, I like it."
"Half-demon Si Teng is really very demonic. I feel it now."
"Brother, don't sleep. Your talent is too great to be suppressed by a coffin. Hurry up and write a novel. If you don't write, I'm afraid that after your crab roe cakes sell well and make a lot of money, you will stop writing and become a rich second-generation."
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Almost all positive reviews.
Lu Feng took a glance and immediately smiled with satisfaction.
I looked at the time and it was already 5am.
Sleep sleep.
(End of this chapter)
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