This character is too one-dimensional; she shouldn't just live for eternal separation. She should be willing to sacrifice for the world, for protection...
Only by making changes like this can I do justice to this piece of music.
While love is worthy of our praise, focusing solely on love in a fantasy world would make my script seem lacking in depth.
Tao Mimi took out her pen and began to mutter and scribble as she spoke, "Liu Jing represents a kind of benevolence, a continuation of a mission, a legacy passed down through heaven and earth..."
Yongli represents destruction, a cruelty where heaven and earth are indifferent and all things are treated like straw dogs, so he needs to fight, and he fights all his life.
The two of them were like yin and yang, destined to be entangled, yet forever unable to merge.
Director Wei also rested one hand on the table and tapped the table rhythmically with the other.
He looked at Tao Mimi and said, "You need to revise the script. The previous script was too small-minded. You need to make the character of Liu Jing more divine, yes, that kind of compassionate and merciful divinity."
The main character's scenes can't be changed much, but thankfully Liu Jing's scenes haven't started yet, so we can start with Liu Jing.
Tao Mimi nodded and continued writing.
She didn't even notice when her pen accidentally brushed against her face while she was thinking.
She suddenly raised her head, then smiled and said to Xu Yanyu, "Yanyu, could you play that song on repeat for me?"
I really resonated with it! Listening to the revisions, I feel it will be even better.
Xu Yanyu's lips twitched, as if she wanted to remind Tao Mimi that there was a pen mark on her face.
However, when Xu Yanyu saw Tao Mimi burying her head in making changes again, she chose to keep quiet and turn the music back on.
The stirring music started playing again, and Tao Mimi's expression grew even more somber as she buried herself in her writing.
Director Wei also took out his phone with a hint of melancholy.
Then he heard a soft sobbing sound.
Director Wei suddenly looked toward the source of the sound; it was his good assistant director.
He nudged the assistant director. "What's wrong with you?"
The assistant director shifted his body and remained silent.
But his silence only fueled Director Wei's curiosity even more.
Director Wei stopped looking at his phone and kept staring at the assistant director.
The assistant director must have had a sore neck, because when he looked up, he met Wei's eyes.
The assistant director was like that frightened fledgling, so scared that he buried his head and went back to the nest.
"Oh! Why are your eyes so swollen from crying?"
In an instant, it was like a silver bottle suddenly spilling, or like a raging storm...
Director Wei's shouts were so loud that they not only alerted the other two people but also drew in the people who were busy at the door.
Everyone's gossipy gazes were fixed on the assistant director.
Xu Yanyu turned down the volume, moved the computer to the side, and secretly glanced at the assistant director.
Tao Mimi paused for a moment, then put down the pen without hesitation and looked at the assistant director.
"Who's crying? Why are they crying? What's wrong?"
The three questions in a row represent Tao Mimi's persistent spirit of inquiry and also express her deep concern for her colleagues.
The assistant director glared angrily at Director Wei, his eyes filled with shame and reproach...
Director Wei touched his head, embarrassed, and said, "I've never seen a grown man cry before, I got a little too excited."
Seeing that the assistant director's glare at him hadn't changed, Director Wei added, "You know, I've always had a loud voice."
"What are you all looking at? Get back to your own business!"
Director Wei chased away the crowd that had come to watch the commotion.
The crowd dispersed, reluctantly, driven by their curiosity.
Xu Yanyu sat up straight and secretly turned the volume down a little more, her ears sticking out.
The assistant director then said in a very low voice, "I cried because I heard that song. You know I'm a rather sentimental person."
Director Wei was speechless. He rolled his eyes at the assistant director. "So pathetic? How many times has this been repeated? And you're still crying!"
"I kept crying because it kept looping. After the first time I finished playing it, I got goosebumps all over my body."
Then my eyes stung, and I felt them become wet.
The assistant director looked at Director Wei with a particularly aggrieved expression.
Director Wei turned his head away and said irritably, "Don't look at me with those teary eyes. I'm not a handsome guy, and you're not a girl. Let's keep things innocent."
Xu Yanyu turned the volume down a little more...
She turned to look at Tao Mimi.
Tao Mimi is pretending to write.
However, Xu Yanyu had already noticed that Tao Mimi was suppressing a smile.
The assistant director was furious. "I didn't... I'm just a little sentimental."
This song really makes me want to cry. Don't you guys feel anything?
“I get the feeling! I want to revise the script after hearing it,” Tao Mimi interjected.
“I still had a feeling for it, so I had her revise the script again,” Director Wei replied after considering his words.
However, he still looked at the assistant director with a hint of disdain.
Xu Yanyu added, "Everyone's reaction is different; perhaps your reaction was a bit too intense."
The assistant director rolled his eyes at them a few times, then stopped dwelling on the topic.
He looked at Tao Mimi, "Screenwriter Tao, have you finished revising it?"
Tao Mimi nodded and replied, "I've almost finished revising it. Let me show it to you."
Director Wei took her script, glanced through it, and said, "The revisions are quite good, except that Liu Jing has more screen time. This character seems more likable than the female lead."
In the past, Director Wei would definitely not have liked supporting actors overshadowing the main actors, but since Zhang Ying had just caused such a mess by filming multiple projects at once, he didn't say anything more.
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