60. Chapter 60: The terrifying five-character quatrain with two even rhymes!



On the contrary, it received rave reviews! …

[Fuck! Seven sentences and five rhymes! Hago, you are my daddy! ]

[The five-character verse has two flat rhymes! Gou Ge’s cover is really amazing, I can’t help but admit it! To play rap, you have to be an expert! An expert can tell the quality of a rap once he makes a move! ]

[The ceiling of domestic entertainment rap is indeed well-deserved! 】

[This paragraph of lyrics is really well changed, it’s all about attitude, all about technique, all about emotion! ]

[A bombing-level rap! Too hardcore, the most classic and pure old school, Dog Brother is invincible! ]

Look down.

Almost two or three pages are filled with all kinds of rave reviews.

For a moment, Su Siyu was a little confused.

"ah?!"

Are we listening to the same song? Is this cover as good as they say?

A five-character quatrain with two even rhymes? !

Su Siyu keenly observed a "key word".

Isn't this a common type of rhyme in poetry?

The so-called two-level rhyme pattern of five-character quatrain refers to the fact that in a five-character quatrain, only the second and fourth lines have two level rhymes.

The first and third sentences rhyme with the flat tone.

Su Siyu is a little queen of ancient style.

This kind of knowledge is still very clear.

She frowned.

Click on the adapted lyrics again.

After reading it carefully again!

Sure enough, she discovered some clues! These seven modified lyrics...

"It seems like he actually used the rhyme scheme of the five-character quatrain with two flat lines?!"

The first and third sentences rhyme with the flat tone.

The second and fourth sentences have two level tones rhyming.

The key is these seven lines of lyrics.

It also includes a five-bet.

The so-called five-rhyme means that the last words of five consecutive sentences all rhyme with the same final vowel.

This paragraph starts from the third sentence to the last sentence.

In the five middle sentences, the last words all use the final vowel "ou" to rhyme.

When I listened to it for the first time.

Perhaps it was the strong "metallic feel" of Hagou's cover that made Su Siyu difficult to adapt to, so much so that she actually ignored this detail for a while.

Now pay attention again.

I just realized that this adaptation is very interesting.

Su Siyu couldn't help but take a deep breath.

"It seems that this Hagou teacher is quite powerful."

Obviously, the purpose of this adaptation is to show off skills.

The key is that I was really impressed by him.

Su Siyu clicked on several comments with the most likes.

I was surprised to find out that these people are all certified underground rappers.

"All right……"

No wonder.

It is understandable that he is admired by the younger generations in his own circle.

But in Su Siyu's opinion.

The difference between this cover song is still quite big.

The whole process is almost in the same tune.

In Su Siyu's opinion, this kind of rhythmic rap is quite different from Lu Chen's melodic rap.

But Su Siyu also had to admit it.

Hagou is indeed stronger than she thought!

This five-character quatrain alone rhymes with two types of flat rhymes.

I still see the strength of this old OG.

Well, it seems that this cover is not as bad as she thought.

And now.

It made a hot debut accompanied by HaGou's cover.

The melody of "Besieged on All Sides" spreads across the country again! Whoosh~ It seems that the screams and worships of rappers from all over the world can be heard in the night sky.

"Well, as expected of an old OG, his strength is still quite formidable!"

Zhang Xiansheng’s live broadcast room.

Zhang Xiansheng, who has been looking forward to Hagou's cover, certainly would not miss this cover.

While he was expressing his feelings, the comment section had already started discussing.

[Do you really think this cover of a song is good? Why does it sound like shit to me? ]

[It's OK! To be honest, it's OK. It's quite exciting and enjoyable. It's like a machine gun the whole time. It feels like this song is going to blow up the whole world. It's quite enjoyable to listen to. ]

[Uh... don't you think the lyrics of that part are a little bit depressing? ]

[It seems that you still don’t understand rap. If rap is not dirty, can it still be called rap? This is originally a culture created by a group of American street gangs. ]

[Sorry, this is not abroad, but in China, thank you! There are no black society in our country! ]

【Music is like a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. Moreover, rap is a genre that is controversial and extremely niche. Why do we have to argue about who is right and who is wrong?】

See the comment section is boiling with heated arguments.

Zhang Xiansheng cleared his throat.

"Everyone stop arguing. Each type of music has its own audience. There is no need to compete for high or low.

Let’s evaluate these two songs objectively.

Let me give my own conclusion first.

I think these two songs are pretty evenly matched.

There are several reasons for this.

First point: As I said earlier, Lu Chen is good at melody and rhythm. His melodic rap, in a sense, is more in line with mainstream aesthetics, there is no doubt about that.

And HaGou, as always, sticks to his pure old school rhythmic rap style.

His emotions and skills are slightly better than Lu Chen's.

It is worth emphasizing that.

Emotion is a major feature of rhythmic rap. Generally, the personal emotions in rhythmic rap are fuller than those in melodic rap!

You should have felt this after watching the video.

When Hagou sings, there is a roar that feels like it's hollowing out your body!

Is the speaking speed and tone faster and more frequent, and the emotions more aggressive?

This is the characteristic of rhythm rap!

As for skills.

You may all feel that adapting that verse is a bit dirty!

Well, it is indeed a lot dirtier than the original song ~ but I can’t deny that this is the style of rap.

Let’s skip the content and just talk about the rhyme.

It actually uses the rhyme writing method of [five-character quatrain with two-style flat rhyme] plus a five-character rhyme..."

Zhang Xiansheng briefly analyzed the key points of the song based on the lyrics.

As he explained in depth.

The debate in the comment section gradually stopped...

[Fuck, there seems to be something~]

[I didn’t feel anything before I said it, but now that I’ve said it, it’s a bit amazing. 】

[A five-character quatrain with two-style flat rhyme? It sounds a bit cool. ]

[Isn't it just rhyming? Who doesn't know how to do it? Why don't you just open your mouth and do it? ]

[Yo yo yo, you are awesome, why don't you give me a five-bet? You are so quick to act. I think you are the one who is quick to act. ]

"But."

After all, when it comes to music, we still prefer melody rather than rhythm.

Overall, HaGou's cover of this song still maintains his style as an old OG.

It's very aggressive, and I don't know if you've noticed, but he actually sped up the entire song by thirty-six seconds.

Therefore, the sound impact it creates for us is more radical than the original song! From the perspective of hardcore cover, I still approve of him!

As the only second-tier rapper in the country.

This guy really has something!"

Zhang Xiansheng tries his best to make his evaluation as objective as possible.

"Well, as usual, let's just give a simple score.

A rap song.

There are three common dimensions of judgment.

flow.

rhyme.

And attitude!

In other words, rap talks about [counterattack] or [aggression].

flow.

Lu Chen is a melodic rapper, while Hagou is a typical rhythmic rapper.

As I expected, Hagou failed to reproduce Lu Chen's unique sentence-punctuated rap style.

So on the flow.

If calculated based on a full score of 10.

I gave Lu Chen nine points, one point less because I was afraid he would become too proud.

As for Ha Gou, I'd give it... six points.

Relatively speaking.

Lu Chen’s flow is definitely more personal.

I am absolutely sure of this.

As for the rhyme.

The original song of "Besieged on All Sides" is basically double rhymes, with four triple rhymes.

To be honest, this song does not pursue the ultimate rhyme.

Instead, it focuses more on emotional output.

So my score for Lu Chen is: seven points.

As for Hagou, I have already introduced how powerful his lyrics are.

In the rhyme section.

I would like to give Hagou nine points!

As for the third dimension, attitude and counterattack.

In fact, I think the lyrics of the original song are already very explosive!

But after Hagou's changes, the lyrics became more outrageous, arrogant and hardcore.

This is all obvious.

Therefore, my score is.

Lu Chen eight points.

Ha Gou 9 points.

When you count them up... Hmm, it seems like they're all an average of 8 points.

Sure enough, it was basically consistent with my impression. Lu Chen's original song and Ha Gou's cover each have their own merits. "

After listening to Zhang Xiansheng’s evaluation.

The live broadcast room obviously didn't buy it.

There are still different opinions at the moment.

Zhang Xiansheng was also helpless.

After all, music itself is something that is subject to different opinions.

The two people do have their own strengths, and they can sing two styles in one song.

If you look at it purely from a rap perspective.

We have to determine who is better.

It's really beyond Zhang Xiansheng's ability.

You can say that Hagou’s singing is not as good as Lu Chen’s.

But from a professional perspective.

There is indeed something about Hagou's cover. This cannot be denied or ignored.

Let’s just talk about the five-rhyme and five-quatrain rhyme patterns with two even rhymes.

Can I ignore it?

Obviously not.

And now.

Tiancheng Entertainment.

Feng Nan and Zhao Ling worked overtime tonight to discuss plans for the second concert.

Also in the office, just finished listening to Ha Gou's cover.

"What do you think?"

"Truthfully?"

"Nonsense! Do you think I'll let you tell a lie?"

Zhao Ling rolled her eyes.

“If you look at it purely from a rap perspective, it’s pretty strong!”

Feng Nan commented with a frown.

"What's strong?"

"Rhyme and emotion. The former is the embodiment of rap skills, and the latter is the soul of rap. In these two aspects, Hagou has shown something. He is worthy of being an old OG. The lyrics of that adaptation are dirty, but very exciting!"

Zhao Ling: “…”

"Okay, it seems that I can't understand this kind of rap, it's so ugly, far inferior to our Lu Chen!"

"It's different, Mr. Zhao. The styles are different. If they were all rhythm rap or melody rap, then you could still compare them. But this thing, although it's one song, it gives off the feeling of two songs. How can we compare them? We can only say that each has its own strengths and weaknesses."

Zhao Ling: "Then how do we decide the winner?"

Feng Nan: "Let's leave it to the audience. Whichever song the audience says is good, we'll go with it."

Zhao Ling was speechless: "Isn't this just being a rogue? A cover song should follow the original song, how can you do it like this?"

Feng Nan: "They are second-tier celebrities after all, so they have to have their own attitude. Anyway, you don't have to worry about it, just let them be, netizens will make their own judgments, why should we rush."

Zhao Ling thought the same thing and said, "Okay, let's continue talking about the next concert."

Having said that, the two of them were about to continue.

“Buzz!”

At this time, Feng Nan, who followed Hagou Weibo with a small account, received a new pop-up window from Weibo again.

"The artist you follow, Hagou, has released a new video!"

Feng Nan was stunned.

New video updates? Is that possible? …

Zhang Xiansheng’s live broadcast room.

The comments section is still full of heated debate.

Suddenly someone said: [Oh my god, Hagou released another song! Go listen to it!]

Zhang Xiansheng was stunned.

Another new song?! I was surprised.

He quickly clicked on Hagou's scarf.

really!

Hago released a new video.

Caption: [Here comes another even more explosive new song: "Rap Artist", for everyone! ]

At that moment, countless hands clicked on this video! !

(End of this chapter)


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