Chapter 17: Final Remarks



I remember the last time I wrote a review, it was still on the shelves, but there was a misunderstanding, which led to the loss of many readers.

Of course, this is my own fault. On the one hand, I did not communicate well with the editor, and on the other hand, there was a problem with that part of the plot. So I am very grateful to the book friends who have supported me until now. It is because of you that I have persisted in writing until now.

And this is actually the first completed novel in my writing career. Although it is not long, I think it is still quite memorable.

On the end of this book:

In fact, the ending is quite different from what I imagined, but I found that I don't have the ability to write the imagined ending well. Of course, there are still many places to write about this book, such as breaking the confidentiality law. But again, I don't have the confidence to write this aspect well, so I finally simplified the plot of this part.

My personal life and work have also brought me a lot of pressure, which is why I have updated very little during this period. Continuing to write makes me feel very tired.

Fortunately, so far, the story of this book is still complete (barely complete).

It can be said that it is not perfect, and even has many problems and defects, which is a pity for me, but I feel relieved because compared with the previous book, I feel that I have made great progress.

More importantly, from the beginning to the end of the book, I also realized more of my shortcomings, including: the story is too short, the emotional line is unclear or even non-existent, the enemies who are repeatedly pulled out and whipped are tiring, and the development of the story is sometimes out of control (it turns out that it’s not enough to just make an outline, I have to come up with a detailed outline and character settings for the next book)...

These are the things I need to avoid or improve in the future.

I hope the next book can be more exciting. I dare not say that I can write it very well, but I can only say that I hope to improve with each book.

(It’s so strange. I don’t know why even the thank you notes I wrote were different from what I had imagined in my mind… My brain is a mess. It turns out that both my main job and my side job cannot be writing.) Of course, there are still some things that can be written in the back of this book, but I guess they won’t be included in the formal chapters. Maybe I’ll start a sequel (I can’t guarantee when it will be written).

About the next book: Actually, I have a new idea about HP, but I won't write it again in the short term. It's a bit tiring for me to write the same subject all the time. The next book may be a Marvel fanfiction. At present, I expect the next book to be more than 2 million words (hopefully).

This time I will do a good job of character design and details...


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