In the process of writing the subsequent emotional scenes of "Becoming F4", Lin Shu clearly realized that his works are still dominated by the plot. Even if the protagonist has love, it is through the plot that the love is promoted, rather than the love driving the plot.
It is difficult for him to describe the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists in great detail. If he imagines the plot, Lin Shu will have a complete concept in his mind, including the cause, climax, and follow-up of the story. However, filling a chapter only through the interaction between the male and female protagonists is indeed a huge challenge for Lin Shu.
He's not very good at it.
The more he wrote, the more Lin Shu felt that he was not very good at it. He avoided this part a little. Although he could also sprinkle sugar, Lin Shu was afraid that his writing would be too industrial saccharine.
Readers are very sensitive. They can actually feel whether the relationship is developing slowly and steadily, or is like a desperate illiterate who is trying hard but cannot move forward.
Lin Shu has tried his best.
Therefore, in "Becoming F4", after Xu Yiyuan and Shen Junqi got together, there were still very few plots where the two of them confided in each other in their independent space. Lin Shu was criticized for "not being willing to write more sweet love stories", but Lin Shu thought that the plots he wrote after his hard work were sweet, but unfortunately readers had different ideas.
In any case, in Lin Shu's view, "Becoming F4" is a complete story. From the very beginning, the image of the heroine he set was not a love-brained person, and would not regard feelings as the whole of life. Therefore, the love affair associated with the heroine must not be the kind of heart-wrenching, hate-filled love.
This is also the reason why Shen Junqi eventually became a couple with her.
In terms of personality, the two are the most complementary.
Well, Lin Shu admitted that the love stories he wrote were a bit too everyday.
"It's sweet too, right?" He desperately sought confirmation from the editor.
"Sweet, sweet, guaranteed sweet." Cheese Bean said, "I can see you've worked hard."
Lin Shu is an absolute detail-oriented person. The relationship between Shen Junqi and Xu Yiyuan is reflected in the details of their daily interactions.
Whether it was Shen Junqi transforming from a tyrant into a little wolfdog, or the two of them going out shopping together, the hover car driven by Major General Xu almost made Major General Shen vomit, while Major General Xu laughed heartily on the side.
In battle, the two can trust each other with their backs without worry, which is obviously the deepest trust.
Xu Yiyuan is not someone who trusts others easily, not to mention that she was fooled by Li Chen before, but Shen Junqi gained her 100% trust, especially in the second half of "Becoming F4", and the comparison between Xu Yiyuan's treatment of Shen Junqi and Li Chen.
In the graduation battle of the Royal Mail Military Academy, Xu Yiyuan was assigned to the same group as Li Chen and Shen Junqi.
As the best graduates, the three were assigned the most difficult task.
With the strength of these three people, this mission should have been easy to solve, but the conspiracy of the hostile forces made the danger of the mission increase dozens of times. The hostile forces hoped that the three people would die here so that the power of the federal military would be weakened.
But the three of them still broke through the crisis, even though their lives were on the line.
When faced with a crisis, Xu Yiyuan saved Li Chen.
Because the heroine is a good person, not a saint, but a real good person. Even though Li Chen has fooled her and played a love game with her, Xu Yiyuan is willing to save Li Chen.
But she only felt at ease letting Shen Jun get up and rescue her.
This is the difference in her attitude towards the two people.
"Because I firmly believe that you will come to save me, I put my life in your hands."
Li Chen therefore withdrew completely.
From the perspective of the plot development of "Becoming F4", this is a question of whether to save or not, but for readers who are closely watching the heroine's love, this is just sweetness.
It is obviously different.
On the surface, it seemed that Xu Yiyuan saved Li Chen, but Xu Yiyuan was a person who did not trust others easily and only took his destiny into his own hands.
Yet she is willing to entrust her fate to Xu Yiyuan.
[This is like a confession. All the unknown parts of my life belong to you.]
[It’s really good! ]
[Really, you have to rewatch it to notice the details here. It's a really delicate love story. What's more, the heroine is a soldier. For a soldier, what does it mean to be willing to hand over your fate to someone else?]
If you look back carefully, you'll find there's a lot of sweet moments like this. Actually, how should I put it? For someone like me who's good at digging into details, the second half of "Becoming F4" seems to be all plot, but it's actually all sweet moments.
Like the personalities of Xu Yiyuan and Shen Junqi, the love in "Becoming F4" is also very restrained.
The description of Li Chen in the early stage has some intense parts, but in the later stage, it is all calm and gently sweet.
【It’s really sweet after being discovered! 】
[This is hilarious, seriously. After returning, my subordinates were constantly gossiping and building high-rises. The people of the Federation were all incredulous.]
"Isn't the funniest thing about the Marshal and his colleagues? They're all gossiping like crazy but afraid to ask. No one has considered the possibility that these two have been dating since their school days. So, Major General Shen and Major General Xu, what kind of image are you building in the military?"
[This is hilarious! Before, some people dared to invite Shen Junqi to drink, but after finding out that the person Shen Junqi was with was Xu Yiyuan, no one invited him anymore. From this perspective, it's obvious that Major General Xu is more terrifying, right?]
[I can read 800 chapters of the forum style, wouldn't you consider writing more? ]
Compared with "The Legend of the Phoenix", although the protagonist of "Becoming F4" has encountered many crises, it is still relaxed overall. The heroine has not been abused from beginning to end, and she has always been strong in combat and psychology.
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