Everyone needs to feel involved when they watch a video. Nobody likes to watch a video with content they have no interest in, and then be lectured and explained to.
Perhaps due to her own identity and lifestyle, Yu Zhaozhao, as the lead writer of this script, has a somewhat self-righteous attitude, and the tone of her narrative is also a bit unpleasant.
This is a major taboo in scriptwriting: failing to analyze the work from the audience's perspective and instead injecting a lot of personal emotion, ruins the entire script.
"So you deliberately deleted all the romance scenes and even added a lot of foreshadowing content. As long as they add romance scenes, it will affect your foreshadowing. Once they add them, the whole plot will be messed up."
Yu Zhaozhao looked surprised and said calmly, "Sister Yan, you're really amazing. I think you figured it out after just flipping through a few pages?"
Yun Xinyan drove seriously, a faint smile on her lips. She casually continued to analyze Yun Xiao's brilliant performance on the field with Yu Zhaozhao, and then changed the subject, saying, "You think Yun Xiao's performance just now was brilliant, but if you wrote what he just did into the script exactly, no audience would buy it."
Yu Zhaozhao was stunned when she heard this.
Yun Xinyan continued, "The male lead is a top student, aloof and outstanding, with exceptional intelligence; the female lead is a genius race car driver, number one in speed and technique. They are childhood sweethearts, but they can't stand each other. The female lead once protected the male lead. They meet on the racetrack and eventually improve together and fall in love." Yun Xinyan raised her eyebrows slightly, a lazy expression on her face, and said casually, "That's what makes it interesting."
Yu Zhaozhao's studies in screenwriting were all arranged by Yu Shangzhi. However, the older Yu Zhaozhao got, the more rebellious she became. She wanted to rebel against Yu Shangzhi, and the more Yu Shangzhi disliked her, the more she wanted to make him angry.
In order to keep Yu Zhaozhao in the company, he would agree to anything as long as she was willing to come. This project was very important to Shangzhi, but Yu Zhaozhao wanted to be the lead writer. He wanted to encourage Yu Zhaozhao, so he gave the project to Yun Xinyan.
Yu Zhaozhao felt a little guilty. She sighed and carefully said, "Actually, I know my dad spoils me. I know he thinks that learning racing is a waste of my time. But I just want to prove that I can make a name for myself."
Adults always want to pave the way for their children, but a child's life is independent and not a continuation of their parents' lives. However, parents often try to control their children with their own ideas, which is why there are so many misunderstandings and frustrations.
If both generations could put themselves in each other's shoes and think about each other's perspectives, perhaps the conflicts wouldn't be so great.
Yun Xinyan suddenly turned her gaze to Yu Zhaozhao and said calmly, "Have you ever thought that combining the two might bring unexpected surprises when you and your father cooperate?"
"He doesn't want to listen to my thoughts. He only thinks he's right. Smoking, drinking, going to bars—whatever he doesn't like, I'll do it anyway. Seeing him unable to do anything about it makes me feel good. In my eyes, he's the most powerful, so I have to defeat him."
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