Yun Xinyan glanced at the script Yu Zhaozhao had revised and nodded slightly. Yu Zhaozhao's revision was good, but the emotional storyline still deviated a bit from the character's personality. She deftly flipped the pen in her hand and used a red pen to delete large sections of the plot and revise it again. Seeing her hard work being so cleanly crossed out by Yun Xinyan, Yu Zhaozhao felt a pang of heartache. She immediately said, "Sister Yan, did you cross it all out? That's a lot of words."
Yun Xinyan raised a slight brow with her beautiful peach blossom eyes, her expression languid and alluring as she spoke softly, "Rewrite it. This part of the plot doesn't match the character's personality."
Yun Xinyan's fair fingers flipped through the script, while Yu Zhaozhao stood rooted to the spot, feeling as if she had been called to the homeroom teacher's office for a lecture, and she felt extremely uncomfortable.
Yun Xinyan's expression was indifferent, revealing no emotion. Her voice was cold and alluring as she spoke, "All the plots serve the character design." Her lips were exquisitely beautiful.
Her long, black eyelashes trembled, giving her a captivating charm.
"Could you please not make so many changes? There are so many words, and so many plot points have been changed, which I still have to think of."
Yun Xinyan spoke calmly, "Choose one: repair or rewrite."
Yu Zhaozhao's lips twitched; she didn't think this was a choice.
Both options are equally difficult, which is equivalent to rewriting them.
Yun Xinyan took a slight breath, seemingly wanting to comfort her: "Actually, apart from some issues with the romance, the plot is better written than before, and the pacing is also better."
One scene depicted the female lead flirting awkwardly with the male lead. Unable to bear it any longer, she happened to have a sudden inspiration, so her expression became casual and relaxed. Her slender arm moved slightly with the way she held the pen, which looked quite beautiful.
In just fifteen minutes, Yun Xinyan had revised the entire plot, bringing the characters to life and creating a strong sense of immersion in the interaction, making viewers blush and their hearts race.
Yun Xinyan raised her eyebrows slightly.
System 250: "Host, I think the expression on your face is a bit abnormal."
Yun Xinyan slightly raised her lips: "When I was writing, I automatically put myself and my beloved concubine into the story, so I was particularly inspired."
"..."
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As soon as Yu Shangzhi arrived at the company, he heard from the receptionist that Yu Zhaozhao had gone to the Yun Group. Worried that Yu Zhaozhao might offend Yun Xinyan with her willful behavior, he hurriedly called Ye Jin and went to the Yun Group under the pretext of going to learn about the script.
Unexpectedly, they were stopped at the Yun Group.
The staff member said politely, "Mr. Yun and Miss Yu are discussing business in the conference room. Mr. Yun said he doesn't want anyone to disturb them."
Yu Shangzhi's heart tightened, and he was even more worried that his willful and capricious daughter had really offended the young mistress.
He also spoke very kindly to the staff, saying, "Can I wait at the meeting room door?"
The staff were stunned. Who would believe that a dignified company president was waiting in front of Yun Xinyan's office like a lowly employee?
But since the other party had already spoken and didn't seem to want to disturb them, simply saying they would wait at the meeting room door, they had no reason to refuse.
"Please wait a moment."
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