After more than forty days, the editor informed me yesterday that the book will be on the shelves.
First of all, let me review. Fengxue has always thought that this book has about 150,000 words and is well written.
Both the characters and the plot are under control.
This is where Fengxue must review and improve.
Of course, there are bound to be flaws, and Fengxue has also noticed this. After reminders and suggestions from book friends, Fengxue will make more improvements in the future and strive to write better.
Fengxue believes that the biggest problem lies in the last plot of [Equalizing the Land Tax]. Although Fengxue's original intention was to establish the characters, the plot is still too long and not concise enough. Therefore, in the future, he will try to shorten similar plots and retain the essence!
Secondly, the aspect of this book that Fengxue considers himself to be quite satisfied with is the characters.
Some characters were designed before the book even started.
For example, Zhang Zhengming is the best character so far and Fengxue's favorite (whispering, isn't it just a reference to Zhuge Liang)
Then there's Wang Shouyuan. Although his character is there, he's not very well-developed. Fengxue is thinking of improving this in the later stages, as there's still a storyline for him later on (five years, a full five years, Wang Shouyuan is going to start taking over!).
There is also [Song Gongwen], who is also one that I am quite satisfied with, but some aspects of his personality are not well designed yet and will be strengthened.
In fact, if we were to say which character Fengxue put the most effort into, it would be [Song Hongzhi].
In my eyes, he is a young man who is ignorant of the immensity of the world, so both the dialogue and the character are intentionally strengthened, because Fengxue wants to write about the feeling of a young man in fine clothes and on a galloping horse.
Therefore, he does not know how to flatter and speaks directly. Although he knows what is important, he is also unruly.
In the subsequent plot, the young uncle is the highlight and an important role, so you can look forward to it! (He is also a good person who gives the protagonist many fatal blows!)
Of course, there will be more interesting characters later, and all kinds of characters will make their debut. The characters have been set and are waiting to appear! (You can guess who they are, hahaha)
Then, there’s the question of this book.
To be honest, I am really grateful for the suggestions from every book friend.
Fengxue is a newcomer and this is her first time writing a book on Dianniang. There are many problems that she is not aware of and her mentality is easily affected.
But several book friends said that they should continue to follow their own pace and not be affected, and said that they really liked the group drama of Fengxue.
This undoubtedly gave Fengxue great confidence and also determined the theme of his book.
Fengxue had heard a saying before that the quality of a book is the result of the joint efforts of the author and book lovers. Therefore, Fengxue welcomes suggestions from book lovers and will accept them with an open mind.
At the same time, we will adjust the status and rhythm after the game is put on the shelves, and strive to write a better plot!
Finally, regarding the recommendation, I still stopped at [Six-band] and did not go to [Sanjiang], which is a pity.
But it doesn’t matter. Fengxue and all the gentlemen have promised that no matter what, they will persevere and explode.
So now, it's time to fulfill my promise, Fengxue. I will keep my word. After the game is put on the shelves, I will definitely update it more to thank all the gentlemen who have always supported me.
This book will be officially on the shelves around noon tomorrow [12:00].
I hope you guys can give me a first order.
Although it's the first time.
But gentlemen, please don’t pity me just because I’m a delicate flower, hahaha!
Finally, I beg for support~
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