Meng Xing was quite happy before Lu Chujiu came on stage.
He had no confidence in this round of competition. The gold and blue team had a bad performance and was already destined to be at the bottom. But he suddenly felt that he could do it.
He even fantasized that if Jia Yi failed, Lu Chujiu would remain silent, looking mediocre, and might not perform as well as Guo Lichuan.
So this round, is there a chance to get second place?
Even with Mr. Ren Jinqing here, it's not good for a prankster like Chen Liang. Maybe he still has a chance to win first place?
As a result, Lu Chujiu came on stage and shattered his fantasy with just one voice.
This little girl usually looks inconspicuous, but unexpectedly she can suddenly amaze everyone like this.
"She has evolved." Chen Ya stared at the stage and said.
"What?" Qin Yunshang tilted her head to look at him.
"Lu Chujiu has evolved," Chen Ya said. "Some singers, after a long period of sedimentation and pressure, will suddenly break through, like a butterfly emerging from a cocoon, and evolve. Lu Chujiu is like that."
After saying that, he turned to look at Qin Yunshang: "You should also have a sense of crisis."
Qin Yunshang remained silent, feeling a little dissatisfied.
It seemed as if Chen Liang had never praised her like this before. Suddenly, she felt a little hopeful and wanted Chen Liang to truly recognize her for once.
…
Soon, Lu Chujiu's performance ended.
She stood on the stage, sweating profusely, her chest heaving with excitement.
Everyone's eyes were focused on Ren Jinqing's face.
Ren Jinqing slowly took off his glasses and rubbed his face.
Guo Xiaoran appeared to be sitting upright, but the string in his heart trembled with every move of the old man.
If I could get a compliment from Ren Jinqing, it would be a priceless compliment to me.
For him, it was not only a compliment from his predecessors, but also the recognition from the national team, which shows that his Chinese style lyrics are not only popular on the Internet, but also recognized by the academic community.
If he could take down Ren Jinqing, he would be able to go a step further. Especially since other poets' values were lowered by the sharp criticism, his value would skyrocket due to the praise.
That's why he was so nervous.
Not only Guo Xiaoran was nervous, but many viewers in the live broadcast room were also looking forward to it.
Most of the people who like Guo Xiaoran's Chinese style lyrics are young girls. They just think that Chinese style lyrics are cool, but in essence they are still a subculture and are usually not liked by their parents.
It would be different if Ren Jinqing could praise me, and I would be able to stand up straight and be a good person in the future.
Ren Jinqing didn't seem to notice that everyone was anxiously waiting for his comments. He wiped his glasses for a long time before looking up, startled, and said:
"Is it my turn to speak?"
The host quickly said, "Mr. Ren, please give your comments first."
"oh."
Ren Jinqing picked up the microphone and said casually, "The song was indeed sung very well and was very infectious."
Upon hearing this opening remark, Guo Xiaoran felt delighted and felt that everything was settled.
Before, Ren Jinqing didn't talk to you about being "tactful". He criticized you right away without showing any mercy.
It is unprecedented to get a "very good" evaluation from him.
Ren Jinqing continued, "This lyric also talks about reincarnation, but it talks about the cycle of history. The peasants rebelled, led the people to conquer the world, and after conquering the world, they became tyrannical and then were rebelled against again.
"From this perspective, the way the lyrics interpret the theme is very novel and more clever than the previous two. This is something worth praising."
After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, Guo Xiaoran was still sitting upright, but he was already dizzy with joy.
The live broadcast room was filled with the sound of champagne:
"Guo Xiaoran is indeed worthy of his name. His traditional Chinese style lyrics are really up to par!"
"This song also makes me very excited. I can't wait to go to the battlefield and kill the enemy!"
“Indeed, it’s very well written.”
…
After a pause, Ren Jinqing continued:
"Next, it's time to talk about the shortcomings."
After a moment's thought, he continued, "When I was listening just now, I counted several shortcomings. I just counted... not ten, but seven or eight. Never mind, I won't count anymore. Let's just count as many as we can."
"First of all, there are word and grammatical errors. Many of the lyrics in your song deliberately use classical Chinese in an attempt to have a Chinese flavor, but it's too rote. Many words are used very rigidly. The ancients didn't use them that way at all..."
"Secondly, the theme is still too superficial. In China, there was only one dynasty where peasants truly successfully revolted, and there was no reincarnation as you describe in your lyrics. Your lyrics are a bit far-fetched just to fit the theme of reincarnation."
"Thirdly, a lot of the rhyme is forced..."
"And the fourth point..."
As Ren Jinqing was talking, Guo Xiaoran fainted again.
I was fainted from joy just now, but now I am fainted from fear.
He had previously thought that lyrics of traditional Chinese style would be more to Mr. Ren’s liking, but he had never expected that for Mr. Ren, lyrics of traditional Chinese style were his specialty!
Using this to challenge the old man's expertise can be well described by a saying - showing off one's skills in front of an expert.
Although Guo Xiaoran is very confident, his lyrics skills are indeed far from enough.
As the vice president of the Jianghe Province Writers Association, Ren Jinqing is very knowledgeable about ancient poetry.
The more you know, the more you can criticize. You can just talk about whatever you want, but in the end, you can point out as many as 9 shortcomings of this song.
Guo Xiaoran’s fans in the live broadcast room were stunned.
The champagne was opened too early!
Ren Jinqing said that although the other contestants were not good enough, none of them were as miserable as this one.
Guo Xiaoran was really badly criticized. He kept saying the same thing for ten minutes without repeating himself. It could be said that he was hung up and beaten.
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