I didn't go out this month. I stayed at home and wrote seriously, but I still encountered some things.

Last week, my eyes were a little inflamed, causing the vitreous opacity to become a little more serious. After putting some ordinary eye drops and seeing no effect, I quickly made an appointment to see a doctor. Before leaving, my wife, an ophthalmology graduate, said that it was not a big deal as long as it was not a fundus lesion. I asked what fundus lesions included, and she said macula, and then forgot the others.

When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor said that the vitreous was indeed cloudy, but the shadow was small and movable, and there was no flash, so it was not a big problem. It was just that my macula seemed not to be in good condition. I was scared to death at the time and immediately made an appointment for a follow-up check-up. I was depressed at home for two days. Fortunately, after the examination, the doctor said there was no problem and I just needed to remember to get regular check-ups in the future.

Gentlemen, if you have severe myopia, please remember to take care of your eyes and use them scientifically!

Well, this month the plot has finally been pushed forward to the beginning of the war, and many of the foreshadowings have been connected, creating a tense atmosphere. This part should be finished in November, or early December at the latest.

Because war is a continuous process and it is impossible to reach its climax all at once like the Backlund Fog. There are many foreshadowings and many tragedies, so I did not use the writing style at the end of the second part, but just slightly exaggerated the atmosphere of the war and the reactions of different people.

This also resulted in the lack of sufficient emotional foreshadowing in the "Self-Questioning" chapter. Of course, I didn't write that chapter as a **. To me, it was just an important point in the plot structure. Its importance was not in sensationalism or inner cry, but in changing the state of Klein who had no big purpose and no strong appeal from the beginning to now in the fifth part, and tightening the tension of the subsequent plot.

So, what I need is clarity and a certain explosive power, which can be driven into the plot like a nail and tighten the subsequent story.

With this purpose in mind, I finally adopted the method of repeated questioning in this book, which I had not originally intended to use. Because if I use an indirect, plain, or implicit method to express it, the point that needs to be highlighted will not be clear, which will result in the emotions conveyed to the subsequent story being far from enough. If it weren't for the previous chapter, the emotions and touches hidden in the dialogue with Bernadette would not be presented so lightly. As for the method of communicating with other people or other objects, I wrote a version at the beginning, which was very embarrassing, many times more embarrassing than asking myself.

Of course, because I made a temporary change in the writing style based on my consideration, there was a lot of redundancy in that part. At that time, it was because I wanted to let the emotions slowly expand and then tighten them. Well, now it seems that too much is as bad as too little. Sometimes, I have to remind myself repeatedly of the word "restraint".

As for the war, because of the entire style of the previous part, it is unlikely that Xiao Ke will go to the battlefield directly. I will not directly describe the specific war. At most, I will highlight two or three battles to achieve the purpose of outlining the situation. Next, the efforts of Xiao Ke, Bernadette and the plot of the Giant King's Court will unfold in an intertwined manner. I hope I can write it well.

The above is the summary of October. The first chapter has been updated today. Please support me with your monthly votes!

Also, October is the first in monthly votes again, thank you all, this should be the first three consecutive times, well, the extra chapter will be put in the middle and late part of the month, at the critical moment of the plot, and ask for monthly votes again~