One million words, one million words, one million words.
I say happy things three times, and I sincerely thank all the Haki people who follow me and read here!
Thank you very much, Qi for [My stepmother brought three adopted sisters, and I have a system to pamper my sisters]. In fact, as far as cool stories are concerned, there are many points that are hard to accept, which are the so-called "toxic points".
In fact, [九等㵑] is not a traditional kind of cool novel.
The main point is the perspective. Most of the protagonists on the market are time travelers.
The main advantages of this setting are two: one is the sense of substitution, because the characters share the same world view and values as us; the other is that there is basic logic in their behavior. Even if they travel through time and become children and do things that are not suitable for this age group, it is normal for readers.
The protagonist of "Nine-Rank Girl", Gu Luo, is a real local, a student with a sister complex. He does not have the perspective and awareness of us readers. If he shows off all kinds of actions, is sober and clearly a scumbag from the beginning, it would be unrealistic.
I was actually quite conflicted when I was writing this.
As an author, Haji is also an old bookworm who has read dozens of novels with millions of words. He knows what are the poisonous points and what should not be written.
So even if some of the plots are unacceptable to readers, they still have to be written like this, a little bit of nonsense, a little bit of growth, a little bit of sobriety, and a little bit of confusion.
This is a process, and this process will attract many readers and get many negative reviews.
In addition to the protagonist Gu Luo, many people also criticized Gu Ximan, saying that she was an ungrateful person who did not consider the protagonist at all.
Again, Hajijun knows that some of Gu Ximan's plots are not pleasing, and thinks she is ignorant and so on, and this is exactly the effect he wants.
Gu Ximan was spoiled by Gu Luo since she was a child. Because she was seriously ill and weak in her childhood, she couldn't even go to school on time, so her grades, talents, etc. could not be compared with her other sisters.
As long as she stands there, she is the only one.
There is no reason for preference.
Careful readers will find in that chapter that when Gu Ximan first met Lu Xuexue, she was actually inferior and cowardly, while Lu Xuexue at that time was extremely confident. It was only after she met Gu Luo and learned about their story that she gradually fell in love with him. So whenever Gu Luo was involved, she would become extremely shy - this period of love lasted for four years at once.
As long as Gu Luo is not around, Xuexue remains confident and decisive, which can be seen from the beginning when she followed Gu Luo and Luo Shuhe to the milk tea shop and refused other people's attempts to chat up her, as well as the various ways she played the game later.
So from Gu Luo's perspective, Lu Xuexue will always be a shy little loli.
Speaking of Luo Shuning, many Haki fans say that her character design has collapsed. In fact, she is the character that Haki fans put the most effort into. They want to use Shuning to fully demonstrate the complexity of a person. In fact, many plots have already implicitly written this point (here is a spoiler, Luo Shuning will stand up completely later, but the way will be different from what Haki fans expect)
As for our favorite Luo Shuhe and Luo Shuling, let’s talk about them next time, haha. By the way, there are also Luo Liang, Gu Feng, Luo Tianlei, Luo Ya, and the grievances of the older generation, which run through two generations.
Hakijun really wants to write a story that is flesh and blood, where everyone is changing and growing.
Even if this process will continue to flow readers.
Thank you for your support!
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