Chapter 433: Heartfelt Words
Happy holidays to all the kids who are reading this book. My thoughts are a little divided today and there are some bugs in the previous outline, so I'm taking a day off to make some urgent revisions.
Although the data of this book is not good, Xiao Fuzi also wants to do her best to make it perfect. So I would like to take this opportunity to tell you what is in my heart.
First of all, let me talk about the original intention of writing this article. I was browsing a certain audio platform at the time and was recommended a post-apocalyptic article. I searched for it with a try-it attitude, and I didn’t expect to like it so much. Of course, I didn’t finish reading it because it was too long and I didn’t have the energy to read it.
I never expected that after I started writing, I would also run into the word count problem, and as I was writing the outline it was heading towards a million words (even though I deleted a lot of side plots).
pS: At the beginning, I only wanted to write 600,000 to 700,000 words.
At that time, I heard another saying - one can become a god after writing a million words. So I wanted to see what I would feel after writing a million words, so I didn't continue to revise it.
Xiao Fuzi was the first chapter I published after I had 300,000 words in my manuscript. At that time, I didn’t understand some of the rules of “Persimmon” and was in tears. However, I received the first positive review, which made me feel happy. Then, it was ruthlessly hit. Various negative reviews came one after another, and the score was very low, which made me very depressed for a while.
But out of stubbornness, Xiao Fuzi sorted out all the negative reviews to see what was wrong with the writing.
There are two points to summarize and learn from the negative reviews:
1. The opening is long-winded and unpleasant
2. The psychological and fighting descriptions lack a sense of immersion.
There are also negative reviews that are not accepted, such as:
1. Tell the space to Shen Xun, even though he died, he did not maintain the uniqueness of the space.
2. After rebirth, I did not leave school immediately and am still attending classes.
3. Excessive concern for Gu Ye.
4. The plot does not quickly enter the natural disaster.
The last four points are about plot design, some of which I designed on purpose. Everyone has their own preferences, but it is too much to give me 1 star for this and blame me, and even use insulting words. If you don't want to read it, you can cross it out. You can also take back the insulting words if you give it 1 star!!!
Xiao Fuzi couldn't figure it out. Did they want to see the same formatted articles?
Yes, Xiao Fuzi admitted that his writing skills were not good enough, and there were some logical and common sense issues that could be corrected, and he corrected a lot. But is it too much to control the main direction of the story and the setting of the gold finger?
Xiao Fuzi went to the "Persimmon" bar and read a lot of posts. She originally wanted to resolve her worries, but she found a shocking reality.
Many people finish their books immediately because they can't make money due to bad data. There are many books with bad endings and discontinuation of updates. If the results are good, they will continue to write. If the results are not good, they will just write a random ending or stop updating.
Their views are even more extreme. A million-dollar fortune is a beautiful lie. Garbage is garbage. Writing 10 million is useless. If you can't make money, it means you're not good at writing. It's just garbage.
The more I watch, the more upset I feel. Isn’t this just a vicious cycle? ! !
With few people, you can’t make money. If you cut books quickly, you will lose readers and make even less money. Persimmon’s reputation is getting worse and worse.
Actually, I still have a good impression of Persimmon. It’s free to study. It’s free to study.
pS: It costs hundreds of dollars elsewhere, which is more expensive than buying physical books.
Xiao Fuzi thought about it for a long time, and finally decided to follow her heart and finish the book before starting a new one. As long as she writes a word, she must respect the story and the reader.
Of course, Xiao Fuzi will study harder and strive for excellence, and try to present one wonderful story after another in the future.
Alas, after saying so much, I still feel a little resentful in my heart, but I mainly blame myself.
Xiao Fuzi cannot quit her job for the time being and often has to work overtime. She has very little time to write every day and even less time to polish her work. She can only accept some negative reviews silently.
I would like to sincerely thank the babies who spoke up for me. The babies who can read this article should be the ones who have always been with me. Thank you so much.
Hmm~~~
Generally speaking, the main plot of the whole article is to save the family and friends who were not saved in the previous life.
The first side plot is to save Shen Xun and help him find the murderer of his father.
The second subplot is Chu An’s change of state of mind, or growth.
Oh, and there’s one last little answer.
Chu An's partner is Gu Ye. Actually, I had considered Chen Xun before (Chen Xun was in the first version of the outline), but as I was writing, I found that the age difference between the two was a bit big, and this was a script with a strong female lead, so Chen Xun was a bit too prominent.
Chu An's real need is also companionship... Then the doomsday couples that Xiao Fuzi watched were all highly skilled military and police personnel, so she developed a rebellious mentality...
Beep beep, warning: rebellious psychology is not good, don’t learn from me!
However, Xiao Fuzi believes that love does not necessarily require equal strength, or require the other party to be better than oneself; nor does it require the other party to give first. If I have it, I will give it. If I don’t have it, you can’t force it, and the other party is the same. The most beautiful love must be understanding, respect and companionship.
So the big dog will always accompany Xiao An until a hundred years old.
——————Delimiter——————
After finishing this book, Xiao Fuzi plans to start a novel about ancient Chinese culture. It will also be the first time for me to write one. I don’t know if I can write it well, but I can promise that I will stick to it and finish it and will never give up (of course, I won’t write so long again, wuwuwu).
Finally, I would like to send my best wishes: I hope all readers will meet a good person in their life and live without regrets.
See you tomorrow!
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