Final remarks
Finally, finally finished the book.
There have been so many twists and turns along the way, but fortunately, I have managed to have a good beginning and a good end. As Ashan writes here, the outline has been completed, and the structure of the entire book is like this. Some book friends say that the recent chapters have the appearance of an outline, but in fact, it is not.
The only abbreviated part that doesn't fit my plan is this little bit about the new world. I originally wanted to talk about its construction in detail, but when I thought about how it would become too harmonious if I talked too much, I gave up.
The battle against the Qin Group was not originally planned to be described in detail, and Qin Gang's meeting with his daughter was the final outcome.
The World War will not be written in detail. After the end of the empire, the story has actually come to an end. Lin Wen's technology has completely crushed his opponents. It is normal for a chapter to end.
The only thing that is a little compressed is the background of Emperor Shenwu and the original master of the colonial armor. But think about it, it is not important, so I won't add more words in the main text. I will just briefly talk about it here. Emperor Shenwu is a time traveler, and he brought the colonial armor. After ending the old empire, he suffered from the same disease as Hasilama, which led to all the tragedies in later generations.
In addition, I was originally planning to write about this part of the movie in detail, with the detailed plot of Qin Fairy flying on a sword and claiming that she is worthy of Emperor Lin. Unfortunately, the environment is not right, so I can only write about it briefly.
Everything else was as expected.
As for the journey after crossing the fairyland, it was not originally in the outline. Ashan believed that the story was complete at this point. If he wrote about cultivating immortals, it would definitely be another book, not this one.
I know that some book friends are unwilling to finish the book, while some book friends really want me to finish it, but Ashan is a very down-to-earth person. First, he doesn't like to force himself to write, and second, he doesn't want to waste time. So your worries are completely unnecessary. When the time comes, Ashan will naturally finish it. He won't force himself to write with too many words, nor will he rush to finish it.
Please believe in Ashan’s character.
According to convention, Ashan should have told you about the ending in advance. Many book friends also asked me, but I didn't clearly say whether it was the end. This is because Ashan has always been an anti-spoiler party. Only Lin Wen would mark the murderer with a red pen in Conan's comics. Ashan would not do this, o(*^——^*)o
Ashan felt that if he announced the completion in advance, some chapters would not be so effective, and many contents would be guessed, thus losing the suspense, so he never said anything and just wrote silently.
I hope you like it.
Looking back on the whole book, there are too many places that are not handled well, the writing state is sometimes good and sometimes bad, and many ideal places did not achieve the desired effect. Coupled with the pressure of harmony, I am personally not very satisfied with it. The most regrettable things are the death of Yu Zhongxian and the Battle of Shenjing.
The death of Yu Zhongxian should have been a natural climax, but at the time he was facing enormous pressure for harmony and was in a very bad state, which resulted in a tedious and cumbersome statement.
The same is true for the Battle of Shenjing, which was written too hastily and too briefly. Fortunately, after Li Longxing performed a whole bed scene, it can be regarded as a happy ending, and everyone is happy. Originally, there was a scene at the end where Li Longxing woke up and exclaimed that the murderer was the Great Elder, and everyone was careful, but this seemed too boring, so forget it.
Lin Wen's story ends here. He came to the world to make all the pain, tragedy and ugliness disappear, and to spread the happiness that cannot be realized in dreams all over the earth. Therefore, my chapters contain many stories of construction and development. Maybe you don’t like to read this part, but they are the foundation of this book. Otherwise, everything seems to be transformed by fairy magic, and it loses its practical meaning. There is no savior in the world, only saviors who organize and lead everyone.
Ashan has always believed that hard work is the foundation of happiness. If you can be happy without working hard, it is probably because someone is working hard for you.
In addition, regarding the ending, it seems that many people did not understand it. The familiar big face was obviously the emperor who traveled back through the long river of time. He would take the girls who were willing to come (well, only girls, after all, men would not abandon them after having fun with them) to practice immortality after settling all worldly ties.
Qin and Xia's kiss in the snow is an image that has existed in my mind since before I started writing this book. It originated from a beautiful picture in a comic book I read when I was a child. Two beauties were kissing each other on both sides of the bridge railing, and it was also a typical snowy moment. Qin and Xia were the original character designs, so don't talk about NTR. The last kiss was just a consolation, not a confirmation of love. After Lin Wen left, they could only occasionally soothe their inner pain in this way, so there is no such thing as infidelity.
There may be some extra stories later, talking about daily life and fairies (not the ones in the series).
If I were to write about Lin Wen's journey to the fairyland (harem) in the future, that would be another new book. Destroying the corrupt heavenly court, killing thousands of unkind immortals who had attained the Tao, and defeating the Taoist Immortal King who was parasitic on the avenue and absorbed the power of all living beings, that would be a very long story.
But it shouldn’t be the next one. It’s a bit tiring to write two fantasy novels in a row, and it’s also painful for me to be censored.
For my new book, I want to write a book that is more passionate, truly passed down from generation to generation, has an endless spirit, competes with heaven and earth, and will not be harmonized.
It should be released around the end of the new year. I hope book lovers can still support it.
The emperor's journey on earth ended just like that.
In short, all the journey together is fate. Thank you for your company and I hope to see you in the new book.
Congratulations on the completion (really).
(End of this chapter)
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