Small talk and leave notice
This paragraph ended today. I am quite satisfied with it, but there are still some areas that need reflection.
While receiving some positive reviews, some friends also commented that this segment was too long, had no clear distinction between the main and secondary, and was too literary, which was Xiao Xin's problem.
While researching, Xiao Xin learned many stories about the welfare system, and he developed the desire to write more. The length of the article increased by about 50%, and if he wanted to finish the story in one go, it would bore readers who were not interested.
Pay attention next time, there will be more designs in the structure. In fact, "concentrating on the whole talk" or "talking in a scattered way" are both choices, which are a game problem.
Although each [equipment] has its own [story], the details should be appropriate.
So much ink has been poured into Tang Xiaokui, so naturally she will have a good future and become a more meaningful character. She will not disappear, so everyone can rest assured.
By the way, there’s one extra thing I want to know. If anyone knows where is the most reliable place to donate K to welfare projects nowadays, Xiao Xin would like to join in the fun and do her bit.
After all, I wrote so many words, it’s not in vain.
It’s just that online writers have a narrow scope of contacts, and they always come across news that deceives people with good intentions. I don’t know where to go to find a convenient and reassuring solution.
(Seriously, friends who understand can leave a message here).
Finally, a preview: I will be taking a day off tomorrow.
This is the second and last time I’m taking leave this month. I have two days off a month, which is a routine adjustment.
Although there have been occasional lags in the past half month, the overall updates are getting better and better, and the time is getting healthier and healthier.
If I hadn't been slapped in the face, things would probably have gotten better.
This book will also enter an important mid-term stage.
Start taking off.
————Love you Xiao Xin
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