"That's great progress, Senior!"
"It's no longer just a hollow skeleton, but has flesh and blood!"
Lin Yu praised sincerely.
【Ding! 】
【The amazing operation, positive praise and encouragement made the elders of the Chuan Gong Hall more confident and happy! 】
[Reward: 20 Spiritual Stones]
Senior sister is very happy?
pity.
Lin Yu then used practical actions to tell her...it's too early to be happy!
Lin Yu did not underestimate Tang Yimian's talent in online writing at all.
It can even be said that the current level of writing was within his expectations.
However.
Today, even if we bring out the four great classics, Lin Yu must find fault with them.
Otherwise, what is the need for "leadership" to exist?
You know it all, and you do it all very well...
So who is the leader between us?
"My talent level is very average, I have to thank Xiao Yuxue... Mr. Lin for his patient guidance."
“Without the help of Teacher Lin, I don’t know how long it would take me to develop these techniques and description methods on my own.”
Tang Yimian put her hands behind her back with a happy smile on her face.
How can I not thank Xiaoyu?
In order to let her learn how to describe ambiguous scenes.
Xiaoyu even gave her "precious first kiss"!
Such an outstanding boy, such a capable junior.
But her first kiss was taken away from me.
From last night till now, she has been feeling bad.
So when Lin Yu suggested that they read a novel together.
Tang Yimian would clean up the room and offer her bedroom as a meeting place.
besides.
Compensation for her junior Xiaoyu was also part of her plan.
We must not let his teaching be in vain, and certainly not let his efforts be in vain.
Unexpectedly.
Lin Yu's summer words.
This immediately froze Tang Yimian's smile on her face.
“A strong and resilient skeleton shows that your story is good enough.”
"A flesh-and-blood appearance shows that your personality is three-dimensional enough."
“When both are excellent, it can only be said that it has the potential to be a hit book.”
"I do have the skeleton and flesh, but what I lack now is the meridians to make them function!"
Tang Yimian immediately became serious.
He quickly ran to the desk and took out the notebook.
Without any preparation, Teacher Lin actually started the class again!
After running back.
Tang Yimian sat on the chair opposite Lin Yu and asked seriously:
"Teacher Lin, meridians... do you mean the main plot of the novel?"
When it comes to meridians, Tang Yimian is like most people.
The first thing that comes to mind is the main storyline.
But her main storyline is not complicated, and it has been written very clearly in the first version.
Now that it has been brought up again, is there a problem with the main plot?
The next moment.
Lin Yu shook his index finger and said mysteriously:
"Of course not. The main plot is just superficial."
“The meridians that connect the blood, flesh and bones are hidden in places that readers cannot notice.”
"It is..."
"Detailed description of external objects!"
Tang Yimian's expression did not sometimes frown and sometimes relax.
It feels like I have grasped something, but also like I have grasped nothing.
She tried to ask:
"Teacher Lin, are you talking about the description of scenery?"
Lin Yu stood up and paced beside Tang Yimian:
"That's not accurate. It's only part of it."
"Senior, can I use the things in your room to give you a simple demonstration?"
Such a long paragraph of preparation.
Lin Yu finally got to the point.
Today, in the senior’s room, explore the mystery of the glittering gold.
Not only does he want to investigate, but he also wants to investigate openly!
In front of the senior schoolmate, I stood and explored her!
Tang Yimian is eager to learn.
Faced with such a simple request from Lin Yu, he agreed without thinking:
"No problem. If there's anything you need help with, you can take it, Teacher Lin."
Her idea is simple.
If you need to borrow something, what else can you take?
It's just some superficial stuff, nothing at all.
Follow closely.
Lin Yu first grabbed a bad luck bear doll on the bedside and held it in his hand.
Among the items that glitter with gold on the surface, this is the most eye-catching one.
【Ding! 】
[The sleeping aid pet on the fairy's bed, let the fairy hold it in her arms, maybe it can have a strange calming effect? ]
"This doll should be the toy that the senior sister usually hugs to sleep, right?"
Lin Yu asked.
Tang Yimian nodded suspiciously:
"Yes, when I sleep, I usually... hold it in my arms."
"A bit childish, isn't it?"
"But every time I sleep with it in my arms, I feel safe."
Tang Yimian's answer made Lin Yu very satisfied.
"That's good, so holding it will make you feel safe."
"Senior, please cooperate with me. I will hold you for now."
Lin Yu spoke the system prompt in a very natural and teaching tone.
Tang Yimian didn't understand.
But I know Lin Yu must have his reasons.
So I held him in my arms and continued to sit obediently.
【Ding! 】
[During the forbidden land exploration, harvest and use the "Velvet Heart Soul-Calming Doll"! ]
[Reward: Sect Contribution 30, Spirit Stone 80]
Such a small sleeping doll actually has such a grand name.
Not bad, not bad.
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