Today, Qi Shuqing had his camera hanging around his neck, his clothes were neat and tidy, and there was a pen in the chest pocket of his shirt. He really looked like a reporter.
She opened the door and welcomed the guests in. Brother Wolf had actually learned to actively pour hot water for the guests, which was a big improvement.
Ruan Niannian didn't exchange too many pleasantries with him and just helped him read the manuscript.
She found that most of Qi Shuqing's manuscripts used ornate words, with a large number of idioms, and a parallel sentence or paragraph every few sentences, and there were so many metaphors and personification techniques piled up together...
After reading the whole article, Ruan Niannian just felt pain in her eyes.
When it comes to word choice and sentence structure, it may not be possible to make him change his habits all at once, but she can give some pointers on the manuscript and make it what she wants.
"Reporter Qi, if your article is simply used to write about characters, it is indeed... a pretty good article, but from the perspective of the concept, it is rather superficial."
Her words made Qi Shuqing more serious, and he even opened the notebook he brought and started taking notes.
As a result, when I opened the pen cap, I found that there was no ink.
Qi Shuqing smiled awkwardly, "Um, Mr. Ruan, I forgot to fill my fountain pen with ink when I went out. Can you lend me two drops of ink?"
"Sure, wait for me to get it."
Ruan Niannian knew what he meant, so she took out her own pen, squeezed out two drops of ink, and dripped them on Qi Shuqing's pen, letting him inhale.
It's not that she couldn't afford to borrow a tube of ink, but she was afraid that Qi Shuqing would feel uncomfortable. Ink is borrowed by the drop these days, and ink is not cheap.
"Thank you, Mr. Ruan." Qi Shuqing thanked him sincerely, "You can start talking now. I will take notes and give them to you after revising them."
Ruan Niannian began to guide him, "Reporter Qi, let's change the direction of the problem. First, what is the concept of kowtowing on behalf of the father? Why do we kowtow? It is to show filial piety, right? Then how can he be so filial at such a young age? It must be inseparable from the education of his family, the influence of the people around him, and the influence of our country's traditional culture, right?"
Qi Shuqing wrote down every word she said, nodding as he did so.
"Also, the kid who taught his friends arithmetic, first, why was he willing to teach his friends while having fun? Does it illustrate his selfless dedication? Second, why were his friends willing to learn from him? Is it because there is some unique studious atmosphere around? I wonder if you, reporter Qi, have discovered anything since you came to this brigade?"
Qi Shuqing quickly prepared himself, "Teacher Ruan, I have discovered quite a few things in the past two days."
He must have found out.
"In this brigade, famous people's quotations, poems and songs are played on the loudspeaker every morning and evening, and there are also people who read newspapers. The brigade leader attaches great importance to education, and the villagers in the village also attach great importance to the study of their children. They often let their children learn by following the loudspeaker. Although we don't have a school here, the atmosphere of love of learning is no worse than anywhere else."
Qi Shuqing nodded in agreement. "Yes, I have indeed discovered this phenomenon. I have also talked to fellow villagers here. Almost everyone here can recite famous sayings or philosophical quotes. The learning atmosphere is very good."
What we want is for you to discover it.
"Very good, reporter Qi, you have a very good eye for discovery." Ruan Niannian changed the subject, "I think the biggest problem with your article is that if you simply write about people, the pattern will be too small. If you write about a person from the perspective of his family, growing environment, and surrounding customs, the whole person will become three-dimensional and will also be very meaningful."
Qi Shuqing was shocked.
No wonder!
No wonder every time Teacher Ruan submits an article, it is always hard to get a response. In the past, I only knew that she wrote well, but when I analyzed it, I couldn’t tell what was so good about it. Now that she has pointed it out, Qi Shuqing feels that everything has become clear.
This is the pattern!
People with a broad vision always start from the overall perspective no matter what they write, just like when Teacher Ruan writes about love, what she writes is not just love, but the unique love that was promoted under the background of the times.
He understood! He really understood!
Qi Shuqing closed his notebook, stood up and bowed to Ruan Niannian, "Teacher Ruan, thank you very much for your guidance. I understand. I will come to you tomorrow to review the manuscript."
Wait! Are you coming tomorrow? Ruan Niannian asked him, "Don't you have to go back to work at the newspaper?"
He was just about to say, "You should go back and report your work as soon as possible and make sure the school construction is completed."
"Teacher Ruan, don't worry about my work. I originally wanted to investigate the entire commune in detail, but after seeing this place, I feel that there is no need to go anywhere else, so I hope that I can write an article that satisfies you in the remaining time. Please."
He bowed again.
"Okay, okay."
Ruan Niannian watched him leave with complicated eyes.
Why did they send such an honest person?
If Li Congwen had come, he would have definitely understood her intention immediately and then set off to return to the newspaper office.
It must be said that not everyone can take the position of editor-in-chief.
This matter did not bother Ruan Niannian for too long. Sooner or later, the school would be built in their team anyway, so she was not in a hurry.
I just happened to have some free time to watch a play.
Wu Xinghua, who had just returned from the commune, bumped into Zhang Hongyu, who had sprained her ankle and didn't go to work.
They came together to find Pei Qinggang and stood in front of Pei Qinggang's room at the same time.
Wu Xinghua: "Brother Wolf, I made some clothes for you, come and try them on to see if they fit you."
Zhang Hongyu: "Brother Wolf, thank you for carrying me back. These are snacks I bought at the commune supply and marketing cooperative. I brought them to thank you."
Ruan Niannian's eyes widened, and they were full of stars. What kind of hellish Shura field was this?
One makes clothes, the other delivers snacks, and they appear in front of him at the same time. Which one will Pei Qinggang accept? Or just be a scumbag and not even open the door, watching two women quarreling over him?
Ruan Niannian felt that she had used the word "quarrel" correctly.
The next second after she thought of this, Wu Xinghua launched an attack.
"What? Carry? You, a female comrade, do you have any shame? You actually asked Brother Wolf to carry you back. If it affects Brother Wolf's reputation, can you bear the responsibility?"
She is shameless from the beginning. Wu Xinghua's fighting ability is really strong.
However, Zhang Hongyu has been working in the countryside for several years and has survived the most difficult times bit by bit. Naturally, she is not inferior to Wu Xinghua in terms of eloquence.
"Brother Wolf is willing to carry me back and save my life, so of course I have to repay him. Unlike some people, who obviously have nothing to do with me, but send food and clothes every day, and they are almost sticking their pants to the door, right?"
As soon as Zhang Hongyu finished speaking, Pei Qinggang's door was opened from the inside.
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