Chapter 171: A Novel Writing Style



At first, when Fang Yong and Wang Quan heard what Feng Haidong said, they couldn't help but wonder if Feng Haidong was deliberately creating some kind of sensationalism.

The father and son wrote articles together, reflecting on each other from different perspectives.

How could this be done so easily?

Fang Yong and Wang Quan, in particular, felt that Feng Qifan was still just a child. Even if a primary school student reads a lot, what he writes should still be just plain, childish language.

So although Fang Yong took over the manuscript, he didn't have high hopes.

Fang Yong read the manuscript from beginning to end.

Fang Yong started reading very quickly, but gradually slowed down as time went on.

After he finished reading, he fell into deep thought.

Sitting next to him, Wang Quan saw the editor-in-chief holding the manuscript and lost in thought, and he couldn't help but feel a little curious.

What will the manuscript that Feng Haidong and his son co-wrote look like?

While Wang Quan was puzzled, he suddenly saw Editor-in-Chief Fang hand him the manuscript.

Wang Quan reached out and took the manuscript from him.

Next, Wang Quan became increasingly surprised as he looked at the document.

The manuscript wasn't long, and just as Fang Yong and Wang Quan had thought, Feng Qifan's writing was basically just plain, childish language.

It reads in a way that fits a child's tone.

However, if you read Feng Qifan's essay in conjunction with Feng Haidong's articles before and after, it gives you a very unique feeling.

As Feng Haidong said before submitting the manuscript, the whole article is very well connected, describing the same event from both an adult's perspective and a child's perspective.

Although the words and sentences used by the child were very ordinary, they were full of emotion in their simplicity.

That was after a child witnessed his father's hard work in running the business for the family.

From a child's perspective, I feel genuinely moved and proud of my father.

Connecting the preceding and following sections of the article are Feng Haidong's own explanations, as well as some of his comments on his son's essay.

This kind of communication between father and son through writing is very pleasant to read.

After reading it, Fang Yong and Wang Quan felt that this was how a father and son should be.

The father and son communicated in a friendly tone, using written texts as their medium.

As a father himself, Fang Yong felt envious, and even a little jealous of Feng Haidong.

Wang Quan has no children, but one can still feel the emotions in the father-son communication through this article.

How good is the writing style of this article?

It's really hard to say that she has any writing skills.

Perhaps this article is not suitable for publication in a literary magazine.

However, when this article was published in a newspaper, specifically in the section on people's livelihoods and families, it was indeed a very good article.

Because it is simple and unadorned, it is easy for anyone to understand.

If you can understand it, you can feel the father-son relationship expressed in the article.

After reading it, Wang Quan looked up at Feng Haidong and said, "Brother Haidong, this article of yours is another pleasant surprise. Before reading it, I never imagined that articles could be written like this."

Fang Yong added, "Yes, I never expected that I could write an article in this form."

When Feng Haidong heard the two editors say this, he knew that there shouldn't be any major problems with the article.

"Actually, my article was inspired by my son. He first wrote an essay about my business, and I pointed out some problems to him and asked him to make some revisions. Then I also had the idea of ​​writing something before and after my son's essay and embedding my son's essay into it."

After listening, Fang Yong said, "Hai Dong, you did a great job with the 'inlay' technique."

Feng Haidong smiled and said, "It's kind of an experiment."

Wang Quan said, "Brother Haidong, I thought you were too busy with business to write articles anymore, but I didn't expect you to write such an article."

Feng Haidong said helplessly, "I really don't have much time to write. I'm busy with business until quite late every day."

Feng Qifan couldn't help but say, "Dad is coming home later and later every night. Now I don't even see him come home before I fall asleep."

Fang Yong and Wang Quan didn't laugh when they heard this; they could also sense the bitterness behind it.

News of Feng Haidong's business ventures spread throughout his circle of friends.

Many people actually gossip behind Feng Haidong's back, thinking that he must have made a lot of money in business.

But the hard work behind it is something that many people may overlook.

Fang Yong and Wang Quan only understood the hard work behind Feng Qifan's essay after reading it.

Fang Yong looked at Feng Qifan and asked, "Did you want to write this essay because your dad is coming home later and later? Do you want to use this essay to tell your dad not to always work so hard?"

Feng Qifan paused for a moment, then nodded and said, "Uncle, you're right. I want Dad to see this so he won't be too tired and will pay more attention to me and my sister."

Upon hearing his son's words, Feng Haidong smiled and said, "Okay, Dad already knows."

Wang Quan smiled and said, "So, Brother Haidong specially brought the children here today because he read his son's essay and brought them to visit the newspaper office?"

Feng Haidong said, "Yes, I think there are many ways to broaden children's horizons. Reading is one way, and going out to see and hear is another. So today I want to let them try a different approach."

Wang Quan said, "I never realized before that Hai Dong is such a good father."

Fang Yong said, "Haha, actually, Hai Dong sent his son's essay over before, and I thought he was a good father."

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