Mo Xiaoqing smiled and replied without any surprise, "Many people commented that they don't want him to die."
Lin Shanshan nodded vigorously, talking nonstop, "Yes, I took some time yesterday to read your comments, and a lot of people said they didn't want him to die. I think so too, great minds think alike. How about we change the ending? Let's not let him die!"
The more she thought about it, the more regrettable it seemed. If someone like that really existed in real life, she would definitely pursue him.
If Mo Xiaoqing knew what she was thinking right now, she would definitely tell her that her crown prince was the prototype of the second male lead in her novel.
Mo Xinze might be more suitable to describe a gentle and refined personality, but his appearance really does resemble that of a noble young master from ancient times, giving people an irresistible urge to get close to him.
Mo Xiaoqing blinked, and when she smiled, two dimples immediately appeared at the corners of her mouth, so sweet it was like touching someone's heart.
But her words were like knives stabbing into people's hearts: "He is definitely going to die."
"..." What kind of grudge do they have that they want them dead!
If she hadn't known that Mo Xiaoqing was the original author, she would have really thought it was a novel written by a cynical person.
Can you imagine someone smiling so sweetly, and then telling you the same thing? Lin Shanshan couldn't help but swallow hard. Why did she suddenly feel a chill?
Seeing her expression, Mo Xiaoqing knew that she must be feeling very depressed. She looked at the water glass in her hand with an innocent expression.
"A novel will have a happy ending, but it will also have an imperfect regret. That's what makes the TV series more memorable."
Lin Shanshan nodded in sudden realization, "You're right. If it's too perfect, people might only remember it for a month at most, and then nothing more. But if there's any imperfection or gap in the middle, she might remember it forever."
Mo Xiaoqing silently raised an eyebrow. "Just like what you just showed."
That's why most people write novels with one or two imperfect endings; if they're too perfect, people will just find them boring.
But if there's even one imperfection there, others will feel uneasy and keep thinking about it, unable to let go of their worries.
"So where do you plan to start making changes?"
“Writing novels and screenwriting are different after all. When I wrote this novel, I never thought it would be adapted into a TV series, so the vocabulary I used may be a bit immature.”
"?" Lin Shanshan was completely confused. She frowned, seemingly puzzled.
After all that talking, Momo still hasn't said where to start changing things!
"Just change the dialogue. If you think the dialogue is fine, then you don't need to change anything. But if there are some parts of the dialogue that you feel are not quite right in terms of the wording or the sentence, you can make slight modifications. As long as the main plot remains unchanged, it's fine."
If her novel were to be revised, there wouldn't be many things to change. They might need to modify the dialogue a bit, but the main plot is already set and there's nothing to change.
Although Lin Shanshan's alma mater wasn't as prestigious as the Imperial University of Beijing, it was still a top-tier university. So, with just a little guidance from Mo Xiaoqing, she roughly knew how to make the changes!
"oh."
*
A few more days passed.
After repeated revisions by Mo Xiaoqing and Lin Shanshan, the script for the first episode was finally completed.
Because Mo Xiaoqing is on set, the script can be revised together with the crew, and Lin Shanshan will definitely be on set as well.
If the script for the first episode passes the test, they can start filming tomorrow.
During this period, she didn't really care who the male and female leads were.
I heard that today, all the actors with important roles will come together to take actor photos.
As soon as Mo Xiaoqing entered the company gate and was about to walk towards the elevator, she bumped into Lin Shanshan.
"Bai Yixue has been cast as the male lead."
Mo Xiaoqing blinked habitually, a very ordinary action, yet she did it in a way that was as cute and adorable as ever.
Do you know who the female lead has been cast?
"I don't know, I only know that he seems to be a new artist signed by the company this year!"
"But I knew Mu Liangliang would be in this TV series!"
Mo Xiaoqing smiled broadly, seemingly unsurprised by Lin Shanshan's words.
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