Chapter 29 Angry Wen Leyu
Li Ye knew that the little spy at the same table was peeking at him while he was writing, but he had no intention of stopping him.
After all, it would take him a long time to write this novel, and he couldn't hide it from Wen Leyu who was so close to him.
Besides, why should I hide this little girl who is so satisfied with me?
Not only does it make things too distant, it's also a waste of energy.
If you use that energy, you might as well eliminate the era differences of "The Hidden" more cleanly and meticulously to avoid causing unnecessary trouble.
It is 1981 and there is no Internet. A lot of historical knowledge that is commonplace in later generations should not appear in a 19-year-old boy in a small northern city.
For example, the identity of Yu Zecheng, an important character in the novel.
Yu Zecheng was a graduate of the Qingpu Special Training Class in 1937. He later joined the Chongqing Army's Counter-espionage Division, and later was transferred to the Tianjin Security Bureau as the director of the Confidential Division.
The names of these three units were not knowledge points that ordinary people should know in the 1980s.
If Li Ye copied all the details in the TV series "The Disguiser", it would definitely arouse great reading desire among readers, but at the same time, it would also arouse suspicion from many people.
How do you know so clearly?
You said you have a grandfather who fought in the war? Your grandfather is a blind and rough man, how could he know this?
What? Yu Zecheng went there in the end?
Therefore, Li Ye must blur the details of this type of knowledge points and specific plots, without affecting the readers' reading experience, which is still quite challenging.
[Pah~]
[The gunshot alerted Yu Zecheng. At this time, Zhang Mingyi, the telecommunications interceptor who was responsible for replacing him, appeared. Zhang Mingyi was shot in the back.]
Li Ye had already written the climax plot of the first chapter. As he was writing furiously, his elbow was lightly touched by his deskmate Wen Leyu.
A writer hates being interrupted when he is describing a plot in a coherent way, but who can blame a mute? He can't get angry!
Li Ye turned his head to look at Wen Leyu and found that her pair of expressive eyes were full of seriousness.
A note was pushed over, and it read: "Is this Yu Zecheng the protagonist of the novel? If so, do you know that this will bring you big trouble?"
The little girl is quite conscious.
Li Ye was very happy. A girl really cared about him, and this kind of thought alone was rare.
Of course, Li Ye’s awareness in this regard is higher than Wen Leyu’s.
He has seen many great writers in later generations, so let alone such a question of stance, even certain descriptions in the novel can be carefully distinguished by Li Ye.
For example, Chief Dai, who appeared in the first episode of the TV series, has a very strong aura. After all, he is a big boss! He must have the aura of a cuckold.
But now if Li Ye describes his personal aura in detail in the novel, the novel will not only fail to pass the review, but also cause trouble.
And when it is Zuo Lan's turn to appear on the court, it is necessary to use heavy strokes to fully and thoroughly highlight the vigor and positivity of the youth of the new era.
This is in line with the values of the times, and it is commercial writing! You have to balance making money and art, which is not easy, but not shabby either.
Seeing the worry in Wen Leyu's eyes, Li Ye wrote on the paper: "No, justice will surely prevail over evil."
Wen Leyu looked at Li Ye's handwriting and frowned slightly. After a few seconds, she suddenly wrote on the paper: "This Yu Zecheng, is he an underground D?"
Little sister, are you going to spoil the plot for me?
Li Ye wrote on the paper: "The quality of a novel's reading experience depends on whether the uncertainty of the plot is strong enough, so I can't tell you the answer."
Wen Leyu blinked her eyes, pouted her lips, turned her head away from Li Ye, and even slid to the other end of the bench, putting some distance between herself and Li Ye.
She was angry, visibly angry.
The angry little beauty is quite interesting. Li Ye sighed secretly: "It's not that I don't have enough self-control, it's just that the beauty is too tempting."
Li Ye did not try to coax Wen Leyu on purpose. He believed that a good girl would be able to regulate her negative emotions on her own.
Sure enough, not long after Li Ye turned around and wrote, the angry Wen Leyu sneaked back from the other end of the stool.
But she didn't stretch her neck to continue to peek at Li Ye's novel, and she was shy and retained her little temper and dignity.
Li Ye picked up a few pages of letter paper he had written, pushed them in front of her, and said, "Please help me. Please proofread it for me, and then make a copy. I will need it when I submit it."
Wen Leyu was a little caught off guard, but she quickly took it. The smile on her lips showed her inner happiness at the moment.
Li Ye didn't tell her the "answer", and she thought that Li Ye didn't trust her as a friend. But now Li Ye asked her to proofread it, so wasn't she just imagining things just now?
Proofreading means finding out typos and inappropriate words in the article, which is quite a test of Chinese language skills.
Wen Leyu's Chinese is actually better than Li Ye's. Li Ye is strong in test-taking ability, but Wen Leyu's range of knowledge and accumulation of writing skills really surprised Li Ye.
It seems that over the years, not only Teacher Ke has put a lot of effort into Wen Leyu's education, but the little girl is also a good and studious child.
But what Li Ye didn't know was that Wen Leyu, the elementary school bully, soon became full of admiration for Li Ye.
After she took Li Ye's draft and letter paper, she began to proofread and copy carefully, but before she finished copying a page, she forgot her serious work and was deeply immersed in the plot of the novel.
[Zhang Mingyi fell to the ground, the gunshot wound and blood stains on his back were shocking, but Yu Zecheng did not even look at him, but quickly retreated to the right blind spot of the door, drew his gun, bent his arm and aimed forward
This gun holding posture can flexibly change the shooting angle, and it is not easy to be suddenly attacked and shot down.】
Wen Leyu had never seen such a novel description method before. She just read the words on paper and imagined in her mind a vigilant dog spy who made sharp gun tactical moves when faced with sudden danger.
In 1981, there were already pirated martial arts novels from Hong Kong on the market.
But whether it is a great writer like Jin Guliang or more ordinary novelists, their writing techniques are very different from the high-quality online novels forty years later.
Jin Guliang's literary skills are beyond doubt, and their classic representative works can make readers have endless aftertastes.
High-quality online literature may not have such a profound background, but it wins in terms of novel plots and imaginative thinking.
Fine online fiction may be looked down upon by genuine martial arts fiction, but genuine martial arts fiction will not be accepted on online fiction websites. (The martial arts channel on a certain website is really unpopular.)
Wen Leyu read quickly and soon finished three pages of the letter, then she went back and read it again from the beginning.
After reading it again, she habitually nudged Li Ye with her elbow and asked excitedly: "Li Ye, have you ever masturbated? How come you write so skillfully?"
Well, I'm very skilled. Whenever my favorite teacher releases a new episode, I will definitely play it skillfully.
"Ahem, my grandfather once killed dozens of enemies, so I heard some of his stories when I was a kid."
Li Ye quickly spoke up to cover up, took a deep breath, and silently recited "Form is emptiness, emptiness is form" before he completely regained his composure.
This body is too kind and honest, a little junior high school student, I can't even think about it.
Wen Leyu was also a pure girl. She didn't notice Li Ye's abnormal reaction at all. She even moved closer and asked Li Ye: "Will there be more plots like this in the future?"
Li Ye said: "Not necessarily, but there are definitely similar plots."
When Li Ye wrote this novel, he weakened some sensitive background information, so he had to compensate in other aspects.
So he decided to highlight the tactics and reasoning in the field of special warfare. In later generations, spy novels emerged in endlessly, and a lot of common sense reasoning knowledge in them would absolutely amaze people in this era.
For example, in the work of spy novelist Chang Qingying, there was a plot about catching a Japanese spy.
Ning Yanwang had already confirmed that the other party was a woman and found out that she had made a public phone call in the grocery store.
But the grocer could not describe the woman's physical features.
Ning Yanwang took advantage of women's competitive mentality and asked the owner of the grocery store.
When women look at other women, their perspective is different from that of men. Men look at XXX, while women look at external features such as clothes, hairstyle, perfume, shoes, etc.
Sure enough, the proprietress gave an accurate description of the woman's clothes, makeup, and hairstyle, and also pointed out that the fabric of the flag the woman was wearing was very expensive.
So Ning Yanwang deduced the exact characteristics of the target and found the hidden spy among the VIP customers of the high-end clothing store.
This kind of reasoning plot would arouse applause from readers even forty years later, let alone in 1981?
Look at the spy movies of this era. A radio hidden in a popsicle box can cause exclamations of surprise. So it would be strange if the detailed reasoning, traps, and hooks in later generations do not fascinate readers.
Wen Leyu was fascinated by Li Ye, and she unknowingly stuck to Li Ye.
Watching Li Ye writing the novel slowly, word by word, the anxious girl wanted to open his brain and read the subsequent plot to the end.
But when Li Ye looked over and asked her a question, Wen Leyu realized that she had not finished her work yet.
"Have you finished copying? Show it to me!"
"What? I'll copy it right away."
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