The [Upload] button lit up slightly, and Alauddin pressed his finger down.
"drop--!"
He looked at the system interface with a little nervousness and saw: [Your story has been uploaded successfully].
“Is this all?” Alauddin murmured, looking back at his own story:
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[Story name: "Dara's Sky"]
【Creator: Alauddin】
[Story summary: This story takes place in a slum with ochre-red roofs, moist air, gray-black soil, and rolling brown-yellow rivers. A pariah named Dara, who is short but as agile as an ape, often wears a faded blue shirt. Although he lives in poverty, he always tries to bring hope and food to the slums. His courage and sense of justice have become a symbol of heroism in the hearts of the residents.]
[Plot score: 52 (sad subject matter, heavy tone, Sekaiju doesn’t like it.)]
[Character Rating: 67 (handsome and clever slum hero Dara, old woman Banu who sells chickpeas, "iron hat" police officer Kumar, little boy Seth who worships Dara, jeweled lady Field... the characters are multifaceted and three-dimensional.)]
[Logic score: 56 (The protagonist Dara did not become a slum hero because of his extraordinary power, but because he dared to protect the poor and fearlessly resisted the "iron hat" police officer, which is difficult to establish in reality.)]
[Philosophical score: 69 (a story about a young hero who is not afraid of the powerful, accompanied by a multifaceted and diverse cast of characters, the idea is acceptable.)]
[World Secrets Reveal Rating: 20 (This subject has nothing to do with Luo Vasa and is adapted from the life experience of the Creator.)]
[Ending score: 0 (the ending has not yet been written)]
【Overall score: 55】
[Current elements: reality, drama, heavy, adventure]
【Your story: words】
[Popularity rating: outside the top 10 million. ]
【Number of clicks: 288】
[World Tree's comment: "In this era, no one likes to read non-fantastic novels anymore."]
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This is the story that the top player on the list, Alauddin, has created since he entered the eleventh world.
He did not use the subject of Rovasa, but his own past life story, and the memories came from his personal performance. Because of the sad subject and heavy tone, it was not popular in Rovasa.
Compared to Mizushima Kawai's "Phoenix Ao Jiu Tian: The Sixth Lady", Alaudin's story is not refreshing enough, and compared to Yi Song's "Did You Fall in Love with the Demon Mother Goddess Today", Alaudin's story is not attractive enough. People like to see the exciting love story of the Demon Mother Goddess, and like to see the story of the killer lady slapping the face of the idiot and ruling the beast. Who would be interested in Alaudin's story?
What’s even more interesting is that this serious story that was created with great effort only received 288 clicks, while Yi Song just casually threw out a low-quality, brainless short story and it received millions of clicks.
Even though no one reads it, Alauddin still conscientiously perfects the story. What bothers him most now is how to give the story a satisfactory ending so that the final reward is not too ugly. In fact, he can improve the score by adding a little color and a little bloody emotional disputes. However, he can't get over this hurdle in his heart when he uses his own life as the theme of the story.
"This is why I can't catch up with the first-tier players... I'm too emotional and too entangled in unnecessary things..." Alauddin sighed silently.
This story will be uploaded to the World Book and become a drop of water among countless stories. However, the World Book will only choose the best drama memory lenses and will not pay attention to such insignificant stories.
Alauddin looked at Anthony, a man with blond hair, a sturdy build, and a frown on his face, who was busy making various calls:
"Yes, Avril, even if your story has a low score, please upload it... Why do you want to upload it? I can't say more about this. Maybe the organizer is watching us. Anyway, it can help Su Mingan."
"Right, Ryan, you don't have to limit yourself to the subject matter of the story... What? You said your story is about... uh, that kind of subject matter? Well, that's fine... maybe it will be useful..."
"Su-style... you'd better curb your fantasies. Yes, make some changes so it can pass the review..."
Anthony is asking all players to upload their stories. Even if they are not finished, even if there are still loopholes, please upload.
Alauddin finally reviewed the order of the memory lenses in his story and confirmed that he was satisfied with the story, but the ending was still undecided. He hesitated and said:
"Anthony. How can this help Su Ming'an? He is standing under the gaze of the gods. Can our story help him in any way?"
Anthony hung up a communication and smiled, "Have you uploaded it? Alauddin, if I remember correctly, your story is about a man from the slums becoming a hero?"
"Yes, yes." Alauddin was somewhat touched. He did not expect that Anthony would pay attention to his story which no one cared about. "I have uploaded it."
"Then wait..." Anthony looked at the sky outside the window: "Maybe in the next moment, the scene in front of you will suddenly change."
...The scene before my eyes suddenly changed? Was I being suddenly pulled into someplace?
Alauddin looked puzzled.
Thick clouds engulfed the sky, and ink spread along the horizon.
In my ears, I heard the voices of many people chanting, "There is eternal joy here, and we praise our Lord together. Prosperity will never fade, and blessings will be boundless. The rivers will never flow, and we will be honored for generations." It was sacred and powerful, like a hymn.
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Moonlight Forest.
Su Mingan, who was attacked by three high-dimensional beings and a god, was unable to dodge and was pierced through the chest by the holy sword of the Mother Goddess of Light.
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