"It is precisely because you do not need to go on adventures yourself," Merlin explained, "I asked the goblins to record the adventures of the insured students in the Monster Mountain Range. What you have to do is to write these recorded experiences into vernacular novels. Remember, these vernacular novels must be written brilliantly to attract more students to take out insurance and increase their desire for adventure."
“Ah? Is that even possible?” another student interrupted excitedly, his eyes sparkling. “We can write their adventure stories into legends, and even add some of our imagination to create a more exciting plot!”
"That's right!" Merlin nodded in agreement. "I hope you can use your professional knowledge to make those adventure stories more vivid and interesting, so that readers can feel as if they are in the story and experience the excitement and fun of the adventure."
Of course, the most important thing is to satisfy the vanity of his aristocratic classmates and make them willing to spend extra money on vernacular novels with themselves as the protagonists.
The enthusiasm of these students was completely ignited, and they began to discuss how to create, and some even couldn't wait to start writing.
Merlin looked at their reactions and felt secretly proud, knowing that this new job would not only allow the students to display their strengths, but also bring him considerable extra income. All he had to do was give these students the few gold coins that slipped through his fingers, and they would be grateful to him.
"I will provide some basic materials for adventure stories, and you can process them according to your own understanding and create your own works." Merlin continued, "Moreover, I will provide generous rewards for each successful work, and I will definitely not let you down!"
The atmosphere in the hall became increasingly heated, and students began to discuss in groups, exchanging their creative inspirations and ideas with each other.
Merlin watched all this quietly. These young literary talents will find their own light in it and earn a lot of gold coins for Merlin!
"First, write an adventure story from your imagination, and then let me see your writing skills." Merlin sat on the chair and waved his hand. A stack of papers and a large number of pens flew out from the space ring.
The students immediately picked up paper and pen and started creating in front of Merlin.
About an hour later, the students handed their written stories to Merlin, their faces filled with anticipation and excitement.
They hoped that their creations would impress this seemingly serious teacher and longed to gain his praise.
Merlin took the stack of papers and began to look through the adventure novels one by one.
At first, there was a smile on his face, but as he read deeper, his brows gradually frowned. The storylines are mostly bland, the characters lack depth, the writing is juvenile, and it's just a mess.
"Uh... the protagonist of this classmate's story encountered a giant monster in the Monster Mountain Range, and then defeated it with powerful magic?" Merlin shook his head helplessly, "This is too simple. There is no conflict or challenge at all. There is even no detailed description of what kind of monster it is and what magic it used. How can it attract readers?"
"There's also this one," he continued flipping through the pages, "the protagonist was just looking for food during his adventure, but ended up meeting a small magical beast, and the two eventually became friends during the adventure. This bland setting doesn't have the excitement of an adventure at all, and instead seems boring."
Merlin couldn't help but sigh, thinking to himself that it was a good thing that I asked them to write it first, otherwise it would not be sold at this level and there would be no promotional points.
He raised his head, looked at the students in front of him who were looking expectant, and decided to give them a severe criticism.
"Classmates," Merlin's voice was not loud, but it was full of authority, "I must tell you frankly that I am disappointed with the level of your writing just now. Your story lacks creativity, the plot is too clichéd, and there is almost no attractive element."
The students' faces gradually became nervous. Some lowered their heads, while others looked at each other, as if they were thinking about Merlin's words.
“The core of adventure stories is about challenge and growth,” Merlin continued. “You need to let the characters face real danger and difficulties. Only after they have gone through hardships can readers feel their growth and changes. Instead of simply letting them wander in the mountains, looking for food or defeating a monster that is not challenging at all.”
“I hope you can start from the heart of the characters, dig deep into their emotions and motivations, and give each character their own story and background. Don’t be afraid to let them experience pain and frustration. This is the true meaning of adventure.”
Merlin's criticism made the students realize the problems in their own creations, and they began to discuss in a low voice. Although they were somewhat frustrated, they also understood Merlin's good intentions.
“I hope you can re-examine your work,” Merlin continued, “and in the coming time, try to revise your story, add more conflict and emotion, and create a truly attractive adventure story. Only in this way can your work stand out and attract more readers.”
Merlin's voice gradually softened, with a hint of encouragement in his tone, "I believe in your potential. I know you are just taking the wrong path. This is related to your major. After all, writing a storybook is also a brand new attempt for you.
"Of course, it may also be that you have never read a really good novel before. How about this, I will tell you a wonderful novel story, and you can approach your creation according to the standards of this novel." Merlin said with a smile while sitting among his classmates.
The classmates gathered around, and they were very curious about what kind of wonderful novel story Merlin was going to tell.
Merlin pointed his finger at the sky and said, "The name of the storybook is "Devil Breaks the Sky"!"
"Devil Breaks the Sky"! ! !
When these students heard the name, they instantly got goose bumps. What an arrogant name it was. Just hearing the name, they couldn't help but want to listen more.
"This is a world with only magic..."
Merlin tells the whole story...
"Chapter One, The Fallen Genius! "Magic Apprentice, Stage Three!" The young man looked at the six bright and dazzling characters on the test magic stone tablet. He had a blank expression on his face, but a hint of self-mockery at the corners of his lips. He clenched his palms tightly, and because of the force, his slightly sharp nails pierced deeply into his palms, causing bursts of piercing pain..."
The story of Nicholas Shaw in another world gradually unfolds under Merlin's adaptation...
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