Regarding the recent plot
, I would like to say sorry. The recent plot is not good. I was not prepared and rushed to achieve success. There are many logical loopholes, which even make people feel awkward and uncomfortable. I shouldn't have made such mistakes. I am very sorry to everyone.
I am also anxious. There have been many rigid points in this book from the beginning to now. This is more fatal in the early stage. If this happens in the middle and late stages, the characters and plot structure have been roughly perfected, and the impact will not be great. However, the poor writing in the early stage will affect the follow-up reading, causing many people to abandon the book, and then there will be no more.
There were some problems, which were pointed out by everyone. I wanted to write something wonderful to reverse the downward trend, but the result was that the more anxious I was, the more problems appeared. Alas...
Even if I had written good things before, it does not mean that I can always write wonderful stories. This is very sad. I was not well prepared for this book. Because of the changes in the interstellar era, there are many things to tell, and I can't write it completely in the way of a new book. I have to connect with the past events of the Third Age and make some connections. This has resulted in too many settings and backgrounds to describe, which is undoubtedly a headache and a heavy burden.
In the early stage of writing, I felt that the plot was too depressing, because Tilan's background and identity are different from Luolan. When Luolan appeared, his personality and mentality were almost perfect, but Tilan was limited by her experience and background, so she could not be written as perfect and powerful. She was only 16 years old, very immature, and there were many things she needed to overcome and grow. She was timid, unconfident, less knowledgeable, incomplete in thinking, and not enough grasp of the overall situation, etc.
Although this seems a bit "real", it is undoubtedly uncomfortable for the protagonist to be humiliated. In the early stage, Tilan was bullied and ridiculed by her classmates, and many readers also gave feedback that they were a bit depressed. However, if the protagonist's personality suddenly changes, it will seem torn and inexplicable.
Because of the protagonist's personality, she must take the most conservative strategy when doing things. This is okay for a short time, but if the plot is like this for a long time, it will seem too bland and lack ups and downs. Sometimes readers also feel that it is not enough to relieve their anger (why is little Tilan always bullied TT)
So in order to improve this situation, I had to speed up some progress, introduce the sister's affairs in advance, reveal the awakening of talent, etc., and this trip to Jielou City, etc.
It disrupted the previous arrangements, and the plot became abrupt. Although it was relieved for a while, the rhythm was also messed up. This book also exposed many of my shortcomings and failed everyone's expectations.
To be honest, I have given up on myself a little bit. 0 0. Not only because of the book, but also because of reality. In the past two years, my family has been urging me to get married. Sometimes I think that if the second book goes to the next level and becomes popular, I will have the confidence to explain to my family, and I will also have some freedom in marriage and love.
But now it seems impossible. I am still too fanciful. It is not a good thing to be arrogant. I have to take it step by step. I understood this principle very early, but people get older step by step. As some old readers know, Qingkong has missed a lot, whether it is college or looking for jobs after graduation, constantly changing jobs, until finally starting to try his previous dream of writing.
It takes about 2-3 years to write a long online book, but how many 3 years do I have left? Living a lonely life may be a good choice, but sometimes I wonder if there would be another chance to choose at that fork in the road of life...
Things don't always go smoothly. Looking back now, I was really lucky for my first book. It was signed by an editor when it was only 150,000 words long. Later, it gradually became popular. It performed well in the early stage. I wrote some scenes that I had fantasized about for a long time, which made people happy and nostalgic.
It is easy to be emo late at night. I am sorry to let everyone see something they don't like. I know that everyone has their own pressures in life. People come to read novels to relax.
I will continue to work hard on writing books in the future, and try my best to show a moving and comfortable world. It is annoying to sell misery, and I will never say similar things again in the future.
(End of this chapter)
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