He Yunxiao took the several rolls of manuscript paper very carefully, and then picked up Fan Ziruo's martial arts novel and started reading it very seriously.
Fan Ziruo sat to the side, looking at He Yunxiao expectantly.
Fan Ziruo's favorability rating has increased from 50 to 60.
Fan Ziruo's favorability rating has decreased from 60 to 40.
Fan Ziruo's favorability rating has increased from 40 to 45.
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While reading the novel, He Yunxiao secretly glanced at Fan Ziruo a few times. Although he couldn't tell from her expression, he could tell from the dramatic change in her level of affection that the girl was genuinely embarrassed.
It took a lot of courage to show the unfinished product to others.
He Yunxiao could understand this feeling. As a seasoned bookworm, he also had the idea of writing novels, dreaming of becoming a literary legend with a single book. Unfortunately, reality told him that he was just an old flop. Not even an old flop, he could only be considered an "old eunuch."
In the first few days after the book was published, he checked the comments section every day to see what readers were saying. Later, after reading so many comments, he became a seasoned veteran, impervious to criticism, and would abandon the project without hesitation.
Based on He Yunxiao's years of reading experience as a seasoned bookworm and his mediocre experience in writing online novels, Fan Ziruo's novel can only be summarized in four words: excessively eloquent.
It's just that his writing is exceptionally eloquent!
He Yunxiao couldn't understand many of the words used in the novel. Although he couldn't understand them, it didn't stop him from feeling that it was well-written and beautifully written.
Every paragraph is like this.
Each short piece is a beautiful article.
But when you look at them together, they look strange.
It has absolutely nothing to do with martial arts novels.
He Yunxiao didn't know how to comment, but in short: if Fan Ziruo relied on writing novels to make a living, even if she didn't eat much, she would starve to death.
Under Fan Ziruo's expectant gaze, He Yunxiao slowly turned to the last page and gently put down the novel.
He said solemnly to Fan Ziruo, "Miss Ziruo, your novel is so well written! It's so captivating!"
Fan Ziruo's favorability rating has increased from 45 to 65.
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