What was this person just saying, so pretentious?!
This is what a judge could say. Is he really not afraid that the high school student on the other side will be hurt?
This is too direct!
Can't you be more tactful?
They found it difficult to understand this and were completely confused about Ren Yan's train of thought.
Even if we dislike their core, we don't have to do this.
As for the European high school students who were being commented on, they suddenly realized something and their mouths twitched.
Now they understand why Class Nine always says their teacher is a jerk...
When this person gets serious, he really doesn't give me any face at all~
Not only are the words sharp, but they also touch the soul.
He is born to be a 'villain'.
No wonder Class 9 has always wanted to compete with their teacher.
As for Ren Yan, he completely ignored these people's reactions and continued to speak:
"Movies are mainly for outsiders to watch."
"Since they are outsiders, they will definitely not care too much about your inner world. All they want to see is a good story."
"It's not what you think it is, especially since it is full of personal feelings and has a dogmatic connotation. It's not just boring, it's disgusting."
“Before this, I also thought that the movie might have some morals that would be better.”
"But now it seems that I was wrong about this. The implication is fine, but it should never take the place of the main story."
"Because as an audience, we don't want to be grabbed by the collar and lectured while we are having fun. This goes against human nature."
“You haven’t done a very good job on this.”
"Even though the story of Class 9 has this or that problem, I still have to admit that you are not as good as Class 9 in this respect."
"So, in summary, I can give you a score of about 6 points, which is barely passing."
After that, Ren Yan ignored the reactions of the European high school students and others and turned his gaze to Sun Hao:
"As for you..."
"You all know the situation. Even the comparison with European high school students just now has already made my point clear."
"The plot is okay, but in other aspects, you still have a lot of room for improvement."
"So, the score I can give you is barely passing, 6 points."
After saying this, Ren Yan glanced to both sides of himself, indicating that his scoring was finished and the other judges could continue.
However, the other judges did not respond immediately. Instead, they looked at Ren Yan strangely, with a hint of confusion in their eyes.
Although Ren Yan's evaluation of the European high school students was a bit direct, they still agreed with it.
After all, the inner conflicts of some high school students do seem a bit pretentious to these adults, not to mention that European high school students deliberately highlight this point.
But they couldn't accept the evaluation of Class Nine.
What does it mean that the plot is okay, but there is huge room for improvement in other aspects?
These are a bunch of high school students. It's amazing that they can come up with such a plot, so grand and creative, and it tells the story of pirates who are very far away from us.
Being able to show this kind of desirable romance now is already a gift, okay?
How come such great potential is just so-so when it comes to you?
Not to mention there is such wonderful music behind it.
Those who know this will think that you are the one making the comments. Those who don’t know will think that you have a grudge against these kids.
Are you really the head teacher of Longguo Class 9, your relative?
At this moment, the other four judges had conflicted looks in their eyes, but in the midst of this confusion, two professional judges hesitated for a moment and then asked what they were thinking.
Ren Yan did not hesitate to tell the reason why he gave a fair evaluation:
"Because there are so many details in their story that can be fixed."
"Let's not talk about the man named Turner. His appearance was too abrupt and did not lay the groundwork for the emotional entanglement between him and the heroine."
"Let's just talk about the opening scene. After Jack was captured, the way he was rescued was too abrupt. It made people feel that it was staged, which really affected the viewing experience."
"Also, the protagonist, a very unruly pirate, how he came to be connected with Turner was explained too abruptly."
"For such an important scene, these guys in Class 9 actually just used subtitles to skip over it. This is a major mistake."
"And the same mistake, and..."
As Ren Yan explained everything in detail one by one, everyone felt their scalps tingling.
Because they found that if the movie "Class 9" was really shot according to what the other party said, the viewing experience might be improved by several levels.
But why didn't the other party do this? This made them feel numb and a little curious.
However, Sun Hao, who was not far from Ren Yan, was well aware of this curiosity.
'Because this is a bargain, the teacher still wants us to handle it all by ourselves...'
Listening to his teacher's description and thinking about the video that was played before, Sun Hao felt a strong sense of being plotted against. He knew his teacher's tone too well.
However, even so, he couldn't help but want to re-shoot "Pirate Jack" and improve the problems his teacher had just mentioned. If that happened, he couldn't even imagine how wonderful the movie would be.
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