Extra: "A Study of the Scenery of the Old Era (Excerpt)" - Ethan Shidelu (Internal Review Version)



The amusement park (as shown in Figure 1 below) is a comprehensive training facility of the Old Era, mainly distributed in the larger cities of the Old Era human home planet.

It operates in a closed area and is a carrier of the warriors' will.

With the development of science, modern training facilities have made full use of advanced technologies such as mechanics, electricity, light, sound, water, and force, combining knowledge, fun, science, and thrills, and are deeply loved by soldiers.

At the same time, it also undertakes the task of increasing the livability of the city.

([Doctor] Note: It seems like something weird has gotten in.)

(Note from Wanjuan: There is false information here.)

What I want to record here is an amusement park that my grandfather once visited, where powerful humans in the old era always had to receive training.

([Doctor] notes: An ominous feeling.)

It was an afternoon seven hundred and ninety years ago. My grandfather was still a child at the time. Led by my great-grandparents, he went to one of the largest amusement parks in the country at the time and had some adventures there.

The first place he entered was a subspace, where many powerful ghosts were imprisoned. In that limited space, the souls that could not be freed competed with each other for people's fear as food, and at the same time did their best to show their own power and terror, striving to make every human who set foot in the restricted area regret this decision for the rest of their lives.

Those souls manipulated objects discarded by the material world and processed them into terrible weapons and torture instruments, trying to replicate their past experiences on the newcomers.

Although my grandfather was still young at the time, my great-grandparents were both powerful psychics. They used their own biofields to form a safe area and successfully led my grandfather out of that subspace.

But this experience still had a huge impact on my young grandfather at the time. I insist that my grandfather's decision to join the army after he became an adult was related to this. He must have wanted to learn more skills to fight ghosts in the army.

(Note from Wanjuan: There is false information here.)

([Doctor] Note: This seems to be a haunted house?)

(Note from [Fire Thief]: I just went to the subspace to take a look, and it’s not true.)

After escaping from the warp, my grandfather was caught in an eternal battle. Everything seemed to be repeating itself, but there was something slightly different in each cycle.

It was an eternal chase. The distance between my grandfather and the enemy in front of him was sometimes far and sometimes near. While he was always ready to fight a life-and-death battle with the opponent, he also had to guard against sneak attacks from behind.

Fortunately, my great-grandparents took on the role of bodyguards, and after my grandfather’s will reached its limit, they successfully led him out of danger.

According to my grandfather's diary, he still felt very uncomfortable after leaving the cycle, and seemed to have become somewhat disconnected from the current world.

He couldn't imagine what he would eventually become if he continued with this training.

The discomfort from the soul caused the grandfather to experience dizziness and vomiting, especially when he observed that there were still a dozen children of similar age trapped in the time loop, he was even more terrified.

([Doctor]'s note: Diagnosed as vomiting from riding the carousel.)

([Two-way clock] Note: Fake.)

After escaping from the eternal time loop, my grandfather came to a battlefield on the sea. The huge warship was shaking repeatedly in the storm, and the violent shaking threw him up and caught him. Under the leadership of a powerful captain, my grandfather began to fight a group of monsters with immortal bodies under the moonlight...

([Doctor] annotation: Realistic pirate ship.)

([Undead] Note: Will I die without moonlight?)

After ten different expeditions, my grandfather finally met the mastermind behind the amusement park in a deep underground tomb, but unexpectedly learned a shocking secret.

This amusement park was actually co-founded by a group of gods who were almost losing their powers.

They are already on the verge of disappearance, and can only rely on using their own abilities to stimulate human emotions in order to gain some energy to maintain their own existence.

Whether it is the ticket seller at the entrance of the haunted house, the operator next to the carousel, or the security guard next to the big wave swimming pool, they were all true gods who held power.

The one who brought them together actually controls the end and death. This playground is built on his corrupted body...

([Natural Disaster] Annotation: You mean, there is a god who can call the wind and rain, and he uses it to build a water park?)

([Doctor] Note: Why did it jump to the sanatorium later? I was missing the amusement park part...)

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“Ding ding.”

Fresnel returned to the rest area of the spacecraft and found that his terminal was constantly making sounds indicating that messages were being received.

His tired body perked up, and he quickly stepped forward and clicked on the holographic screen to check the review status of the first draft of his work submitted two days ago.

Five years have passed since Dr. Lin suggested that he use writing to relieve stress. He, Mr. Ethan, has finally completed some investigations on old-era facilities with the help of several paper books passed down in his family and a diary left by his grandfather.

Although his grandfather was only eight years old when he wrote this diary, Ethan believed that the wise ancestor must have possessed great talent and meticulous logic.

So even though there were many unreasonable things in the other party's diary, he still completed it according to his own speculation, and what finally appeared before him was an adventure of a powerful human cub from the old era.

After all, maybe I am a genius...

Without thinking about how long it took him to write this "masterpiece", and temporarily putting aside the task of exploring new planets, Ethan opened the review result file with hope:

[Review result: Failed]

His smile froze on his face.

【Reason for rejection:

Reviewer Wan Juan: There are a lot of errors between the content of the manuscript and the reality of the old era, which may mislead readers.

Reviewer Arthur: It has almost no value as a popular science book, but is worth reading as a fantasy novel.

Reviewer Wang Xiao: Very interesting story. I suggest strengthening the undead monsters.

Examiner Fran: I suggest turning left and voting in the fantasy section.]

Ethan leaned against the bed and thought for a long time, and felt that what the examiners said made sense.

After making up his mind, he finally reopened the terminal and registered a small account in the new information network that had been in operation for several years.

After tapping on the holographic keyboard for a few seconds, the new user posted his first post:

[The novel adapted from real events, "The Old Era God Killing Record", is about to begin serialization...]

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